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- Title: Battle Maiden pg.1
- Artist: Catolic_Demon
- Description: this is page one of my manga i made called 'Battle maiden' XDDD i put arrows becuase on my others people said it didnt make sense, please keep reading. I know its not perfect D: page two coming soon!
- Date: 01/24/2010
- Tags: battle maiden
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Comments (7 Comments)
- filigree hummingbird - 04/10/2011
- this is most definately what i would consider a rough draft..i think you can do better than this. next time pass the comic around to a few friends before you post. they should be able to edit any unreadable words or composition errors you may have. if you ever want any help feel free to message me. i think you have a great start smile
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- de_Terix - 08/07/2010
- after the 2nd panel i cant read the words, so . . . 2/5
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- Ryu-Hana Uchiha - 04/14/2010
- I don't think it looks clear enough to earn an outstanding rating, but I would say 2/5.
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- yoxyoxyo - 02/12/2010
- lol it looks pretty organized to me. whoever couldnt tell which slide wuz next is an idiot i think...xD
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- Catolic_Demon - 01/24/2010
- ................................................... XD
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- grunt121 - 01/24/2010
- looks gewd, but whats on slide 6 o.o;
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- Catolic_Demon - 01/24/2010
- thankies! XD
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