- by DragonClaudz |
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- | Submitted on 06/18/2010 |
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- Title: Irken Elite
- Artist: DragonClaudz
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Description:
Probably one of the first doodles of Zim i ever did but i fixed it up
invader zim belongs to jhonen vasquez, nickolodeon
please see the original at my devianart
http://dragonclaudz.deviantart.com/#/d2rwx2f - Date: 06/18/2010
- Tags: invaderzim invader irken jhonen
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Phantom-of_Winter - 06/23/2010
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the eye farther away to the left. Lastly, the arms looked misshapened and unproportional. This can be easily fixed if you be careful of how long Zim's arms are and the angle of which Zim was drawn in. So I guess the overall thing you can do to fix this is the anatomy of the character. I would suggest using reference to help you fix out those mistakes. Also, try to smoothen out those lines and I think you will have yourself a well-revised doodle. 3/5 - Report As Spam
- Phantom-of_Winter - 06/23/2010
- This looks interesting. I like how you used the color of Zim's skin (inculding his shade color) and his eye color for the background. It fits well with the doodle. However, the only problems I have with this is how scratchy the lines are. It's not too bad, but it can be a burdern to people to look at as well as distracting. I know this is just a doodle that you fixed, but I think you could smooth out the lines. Another thing that bothers me is how close the eyes are to each other. Try moving
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