- by Skullnoise |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 03/15/2012 |
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- Title: Light The Fire
- Artist: Skullnoise
- Description: A drawing of one of my OC's (Original Character), Axel, using his fire abilities.
- Date: 03/15/2012
- Tags: light fire
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Sila Calien - 03/22/2012
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Some advice:
The eyes is much too large. Also a lot more of the whites of the eye should be visible. The nose should be wider and longer, very close to the mouth. The mouth should have at least a hint of the lips, no one has a line for a mouth. The neck should be longer and the shoulders wider. Also the hair should flow and clump more instead of being jagged. Mostly you need work on anatomy. I'd also suggest you make the flame more fluid. - Report As Spam
- forever_yours328 - 03/21/2012
- I wouldn't have known what it was if it wasn't for the description. I thought it was a guy pointing out this thing on his hair..... But anyways, good artwork!
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