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How could you?!?!
(The two are on a park bench talking)
Paula: Hey Daniel So how are you?
(he pauses and says nothing at all)
Daniel: Well I have good news and bad news and they are really upsetting
(her eyes widen)
Paula: What is it?
Daniel: Well what do you want to hear first?
(She thinks and stares at him for a couple of moments)
Paula:The bad then good because If I get upset It will cheer me up
(He breathes heavily)
Daniel: I'm moving with my dad in Washington in a couple of days,the good news is you can visit soon
(tears start to rool down her cheeks)
Paula:How could you do this to me!
(she leaves)
Daniel: Paula wait!!Don't leave I have to say goodbye Paula!!!
(He races after her)
(Paula is sniffling by the time he reaches her)
Paula:You didn't even ask me if it was okay!
Daniel: Paula you know I love you
(They kiss passionately)
Paula:I love you too Daniel
Daniel:I'll miss you
Paula:I'll miss you too
Daniel:How could you think I wanted to leave you?
Paula:I just couldn't take the fact you were leaving me!
Daniel:I'll always think of you forever and always
Paula: Daniel,I love you how could you do this!I've known you since we were kid's.
Daniel: You don't think this doesn't hurt me to?
Paula: If it did you would do something about it!
Daniel: You don't think I did?
Paula: We have lived together and breathed together since we were 2,how could you?!?!
Daniel: Paula, I...... I'm sorry I tried my best you know I love you.
Paula: Do you?
Daniel: Don't be unfair!
Paula: Daniel I have to go!
(she leaves with tears in her eyes as Daniel cries and sits on the bench the two were on)
Daniel: How could she think I haven't tried?Does she think I don't love her?Can't she understand I have to?(he begins to cry and shout her name) PAULA,PAULA,PAULA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
- by WomanofWhite |
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- | Submitted on 09/28/2008 |
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- Title: How could You?!?!
- Artist: WomanofWhite
- Description: This is a small monologue script give your true opinion I want a critique.
- Date: 09/28/2008
- Tags: miss
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Zack fair18 - 04/12/2009
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it flips alot but it sounds like what most people in the army,navy,marines have to tell the ones they love damn i dont want to think about telling my wife im going off to war but i know she can take the fact i have to do that. SHSA Martinez, USN
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- etoile_18 - 01/21/2009
- ..nice..
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- flippant chinchilla - 12/19/2008
- Maybe flesh it out a bit more? Make it more emotive, especially if you want the title to fit it c:
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- Xx_PinkToxicEyeShadow_-xX - 09/29/2008
- 2/5 It wasn't really, 'Miss' kinda thing. It was more like, 'Bye. I'm leaving' kinda thing.
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