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Monster
When I was young, I used to have nightmares. Terrible nightmares. I had them every. Single. Night. That same monster would be in all of them. It would all connect into a story. The first would the second one's sequel, and so on.
"Let go of me! Stop it!" I screamed. "Stop struggling then!" He growled. He finally pinned me down on the hard, dirt floor, and sunk his venom-dipped fangs into my neck.
No matter what I did, they always found a way to crawl back into my brain like maggots. I bought three dream catchers; they didn't work. When I woke up, screaming in the middle of the night, my mother held me close to her. Her body warmth cooling me.
I felt the venom spreading. I tried to let out a scream, but it sounded more like one of those hiccup things you get when you're crying hysterically. I felt the blood flush out of my face. My vision, and hearing was fading by the second..
No matter what, I could not explain these dreams. I knew they were never going to happen, but yet, it somehow felt that everyone I talked, and saw, was that monster in my dreams. It was killing me. Literally. I wouldn't eat, and I would throw massive fits before bed. It killed me when my parents told me to turn out the lights.
Blood spurred up in my mouth. Soon my mouth was over-flowing with a crimson liquid. Tears formed behind my eyes, and I wanted to cry, but the tears never came down. As everything slowly...slowly...fade. I died.
I...died.
- by Monstertastic |
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- | Submitted on 06/06/2010 |
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- Title: Monster Chapter 1.
- Artist: Monstertastic
- Description: This is basically about a girl who grows up and never stops having nightmares throughout her lifetime. First chapter of many...hopefully.
- Date: 06/06/2010
- Tags: monster
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Comments (7 Comments)
- HaruhiFujioka_101 - 12/17/2010
- I think this is an awesome start to a story. I don't know why your getting all these weird comments so I'll just ignore them. I'm not saying it's a great story yet, but it's a catchy beginning and cant wait to see where it leads. Keep up the good work! ^_^
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- centheny1 - 06/10/2010
- aww i feel so loved ^^
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- smexy emo justin - 06/10/2010
- sucks to be you monstertastic. almost everyone is sticking up for little cen, exept that idoitic noob. so guess what? we all vote centheny1's story to be better than that horrible peice of crap work. My one year old, baby cousin can and has work something better than this peice of s**t so suck it b***h. and you know what, we are all alowed our opinions b***h.
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- s a v e d xSOUL - 06/10/2010
- I can do this all day! You can report me all you want okay? Cuz i have the biggest friends in small places! Okay suck something you noob ********! You said that her story sucked! That is not expressing MATURE opinion. Ever heard of eye for an eye. Well you hurt her feelings now im gonna break your ******** neck! Your telling her to mature! OH ******** NO! Why don't you take your own goddamned advice you bipolar ******** head. CUZ YOU DON'T ******** KNOW!
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- s a v e d xSOUL - 06/10/2010
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come on b***h! I will tell you where i live so i can beat the living crap out of you. You expressed your opinion BULLSHIT! her story was waaayyy better than yours so you need to shut your mouth or im gonna shove a metal stick so far up your a** its gonna come out of your nose!
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- s a v e d xSOUL - 06/10/2010
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LET ME TELL YOU SOMETHING YOU ******** ASSWHIPE. I ******** stood down because i thought you were a decent person, but omg you died, well that, can be arranged!
You don't know me, i don't know you and the b***h who told her that nasty comments aren't cool well try saying that to her. Check out centheny's s**t and then you'll find this b***h is as fake as her story. I will kick your ******** as you flap jack! No way jose am i going to shut up. YOU SUCK!
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- centheny1 - 06/09/2010
- so true
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