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heart It was a cold and scary night here in LA, California, and Crystal was just about to fall asleep in her star-patterned, blue bed. Crystal was a brave and adventurous girl who’s not afraid of anything, but her scariest dreams. She has sparkling blue eyes, shiny, smooth, and bright skin, and the most beautiful and shiniest dark brown hair in the world. Crystal was just the prettiest and kindest girl in the world. She also had the confidence of Indiana Jones -- a very great adventurer and hero. There’s nothing you can find that’s bad about Crystal.
heart One day, as Crystal was just about to fall asleep, she heard a very loud and scary cry that could be heard from miles away. Crystal then took her shiny midnight blue flashlight and started searching around her dark blue room. She looked in her clean and tidy closet, she looked under her bed, and she even looked outside her window. As she opened her white curtains, she saw both of her parents entering their shiny, black convertible, and taking off.
heart “Where could this cry be coming from?” Crystal whispered to herself. Right then, she stepped outside her round door, and tiptoed straight across to her parent’s room. Right in the distance, there were two glowing red eyes filled with anger and staring into Crystal’s eyes.
“Who’s there?” she asked shaking with fear. This time, Crystal was afraid.
heart “Come with me, my little friend,” ordered a voice in the distance.
“Why should I listen to you, Stranger?” Crystal asked, hesitating her choice.
heart “Because, you are in great danger,” replied the voice.
“Who are you?” Crystal asked.
“I am a friendly creature from another planet. You can call me Troll,” said the voice.
heart So Crystal went with the scary creature hoping not to get eaten. There was total trust between these two, until Troll took Crystal by the hand, tied her by the lips, tied her hands behind her back, blind-folded her, knocked her out, and stuffed her in the bag. Troll didn’t realize that this is what a kidnapper would do and that this could lose the trust between the two, but he really didn’t care.
heart “Where am I?” Crystal asked as she woke up. Nobody heard her. She was still in the bag with her lips tied. Troll wasn’t really a friendly guy, or a good guy, so he took Crystal while she was in the bag and put her in a cooking pot to eat her up. Blood was gushing all around her body. Just in time, a hero burst in through the ceiling and snatched Crystal out of the cooking pot. The hero opened the bag and set Crystal free.
“Who are you?” Crystal asked, curious if he was good or not.
“My name is Benjamin, but you can call me Ben,” the hero replied.
Crystal hugged Ben with all her might and said thank you to him for saving her life. Ben was a hot and gentle teen, who has hot blonde hair, sparkling blue eyes, and the most muscular body. He really was a true hero and friend.
Troll turned bright red with anger and threw a kick as his surprise attack.
“Watch out!” Ben cried out to help Crystal. Ben took her hand and pulled her away from her spot. Because of that, Troll missed. Ben saved Crystal’s life and in that instant, her heart was pumping hard and she had this strange and happy feeling around him. Could this be love?
“You saved my life!” cried Crystal. She started explaining to Ben that she’s from planet Earth and that she is in need of getting back to Earth. Ben totally understood for he also was from planet Earth. That’s when the epic quest began. The two friends fought Troll and ended with a great victory. The officers took Troll from the hand and Troll was taken to prison.
Later that day, the two friends ran around in the fields covered with roses, dandelions, and so many other beautiful plants and flowers.
heart “Well, here we are,” Ben told Crystal.
“Is this your house?” Crystal asked.
heart “This is my house alright,” Ben replied, “Let me show you around.” Ben’s house was a beautiful, blue mansion. It had a royal bedroom, a magnificent bathroom, and the most elegant eating room Crystal has ever seen. It made Crystal feel like home. Crystal found a great friend and found hope to get back to where she belonged.
heart The End! heart
These two characters are representing the Epic Adventure characters. The girl is a new girl, Lisa, and the boy is another made up character that I made up, his name is Lucas.
A lead to adventures.
This represents Ben.
This represents Crystal in her room before she goes to that planet.
- Title: The Epic Adventure
- Artist: hi5201
- Description: This story is about a girl who is send to another world by an evil monsterous creature, Troll. The only one who can help her is her true love, Ben. The two are meant to be and with each others help, they can finish their quest to get back home where they belong, in planet Earth. What will happen to Crystal? Will she persevere in getting home. Read this story to find out.
- Date: 09/10/2008
- Tags: adventures love heroes
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Comments (2 Comments)
- ninja-kyoko-chan - 09/14/2008
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nice story
i have one small suggestion
spread out the explanations throughout the story
for instance, do the physical traits, tell a bit of the story, then do the emotional traits
great use of adjectives, though
im not really good at using them at all! - Report As Spam
- samei12 - 09/10/2008
- good story
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