- An angel fell from the heavens landing here on Earth. She was lonely. No one would come near her, a fallen angel, with no one to love her and with no hope for her. She sat in the streets with tattered clothes, and nowhere to go. Her wings got darker, till one day a traveler came and helped the angel up. Her dark wings began to fade slowly away, turning white and pure. The traveler didn’t care about her past or why she fell, and began to see her day by day. She grew happier. The man began to fall in love with her, slowly he did, and she loved him back. One night she wandered with him across the lands, and had finally found the love she was looking for. The loneliness faded and disappeared. She, a fallen angel, had found true happiness.
- by Unlucky Poison |
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- | Submitted on 07/15/2008 |
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- Title: True Happiness
- Artist: Unlucky Poison
- Description: This little story has a meaning, I wanted to see who can find it. The truth is though, there is no definite answer. Some I've gotten are, 'It shows that everyone deserves a second chance. That love is a gateway into a new beginning...' It's very controversial. Enjoy it. Post a comment telling me what you think it means. It's short, brief, and to the point. *^_^*
- Date: 07/15/2008
- Tags: fallenangeltruehappiness
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Comments (4 Comments)
- moonlover101 - 07/19/2009
- Please write another story, this one was amazing!!!!!!!
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- Unlucky Poison - 07/15/2008
- Thanks. That is possible, by all means.
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- Sarethia - 07/15/2008
- Ummmmm, what part of story is not understood here. I do see the meaning though, and it would be beautiful if you changed the wording and used it as a poem.
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- Julri - 07/15/2008
- I really love the idea behind it. It sort of seems like the sort of thing that would make a better poem than story, though. But it's a good start. ^_^
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