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"It all started.... When.... I was born.... My grandmother said I was different. I don't know why. I can't remember that part. Umm, well... When it was my first birthday, they locked me in a closet and kept me in there for the next 3 years. They locked me in with food, water, books, papers, pens, pencils, and erasers. So I basically had to learn myself. Then they let me out and I met you. You helped me a lot and well, I can't thank you enough." I said smiling at him.
"Your welcome. The truth is, when you bumped into me, I felt sorry for you. I mean, you were crying and crying. So, I just wanted you to be happy. I hate when people are sad.(I have another friend like this)" He said with a smile.
"Which shows how caring you are. Anyways, I remember when I came home so late because we went to the park together and fell asleep by accident. You woke me up and told me it was late. When I got home my parents...... got mad...... and...... they..." I cried at the end of the sentence. Brendan knew what was next. He heard it. "I know. They hit you with a belt. Even though they knew what happened and my parents called them." Brendan said. I could tell he wasn't comfortable with this conversation. "Anyways. That was only a few bruises. Except one. On my head. I screamed loud when they hit my he-" I stopped at the sound of Brendan's voice saying," Please stop. I can still remember that dreadful day...."
TO BE CONTINUED
- by RoSaBeLlAjUaN |
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- | Submitted on 07/25/2008 |
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- Title: Horrible Punishment: Chapter 1
- Artist: RoSaBeLlAjUaN
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A story I made up in my mind. I hope you guys like it.
EDIT: PLEASE TELL ME IF I SHOULD CONTINUE THIS, IF NOT, I'LL STOP. - Date: 07/25/2008
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Comments (2 Comments)
- worwolf - 07/28/2008
- Try to make it more... understandable. What is wrong with the kid? Who is Brendan? How did they meet? Ect.
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