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As the realization set in, my mind caught up with my body. I had killed someone. I took an innocent person's life away. There was no sorry, no oops. Just death. As the tears welled up inside and burst out like a dam with too much pressure, the saltiness covered the blood. I left the body right where it was, too scared to move at all.
I had to do something about it, but I couldn't move an inch. Moaning, crying hysterically, and twitching like a stick in the wind, I took the dead body in my hands and set off towards the river a mile away. I went through the forest so no one would see me as I was walking. I let it all sink in. The cops would be after me. I still had one bullet left since I didn't use it on him.
Him, it wasn't his time to go. He had his whole life ahead of him. My tears kept pouring out, the shock was fading.
As I got near the bank, I knelt and prayed. Prayed this was a dream. I opened my eyes and he was there. Tears streaming down my face, I let my brother drift into the current.
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- by wylie dufresne |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 08/26/2008 |
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- Title: him.
- Artist: wylie dufresne
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Description:
A short story I wrote in 8th grade, just decided to type it up.
No, i'm not suicidal, or depressed.
It just came to me. - Date: 08/26/2008
- Tags: brother shortstory
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Lady Alice Road Kamelot - 11/06/2009
- Sweet! That was absolutely awesome! Keep creating, that was seriously great!
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- electrowolf - 01/22/2009
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man creepy, now im going to watch my back with my sister
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- XxBLOOD_JAYxX - 12/28/2008
- OMG. Let it keep coming to you and you will be a author.
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- Rational Delirium - 08/26/2008
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Wow, thats really good
esp. for an 8th grader - Report As Spam
- garage glamour - 08/26/2008
- moooi biggrin <3
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- iCooki3dough - 08/26/2008
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Wow, thats hardcore.
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