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One pitch black day a young dog demon was born Alex was her name.Now 3 year's later the the young pup was stolen from her home ''MOMMY!! MOMMMY!!'' Alex howled ''ALEX MY BABY!'' Mita the mother screamed .You see Mita Alex's mother was a mortal and or human you see her brother oooooh i should have mentioned that Alex has a older brother 5 years older than her in fact ok um ah yes and Alex's father was full demon and well her brother Inosay was full demon because well same dad but different mother his mother was a half demon but sadly he never knew her because she died while giving birth to Inosay ok well back on to the story
OK so now Alex is 12 she is also a slave to a man , Fredrick he's a very wealthy fat man and he work's Alex like a pack mule yes she work's so hard all day and at the end of the day she get's a big fat juicy chicken well not exactly that's a fairy tale no she only get's mmm well nothing.One very cold day when Alex was working in a torn wench's gown you know it use to be a nice comfy sweater .OK now Alex just went crazy and killed everyone because of the amount of blood loss Alex fainted. When she woke up she saw everyone ,dead .''I m free ? IM FREE!'' Alex was now crying tear's of joy then she ran off into the sunset she fell asleep propped up by a tree.When she woke up in the morning she got hungry so she started leaping towards a farm with at least 3 chicken coop's by now Alex was wearing a red kimono she got it out of a dresser from the village ok sorry back to the story.So now Alex was going for a big fat juicy chicken or cow yeah cow ''PAPA PAPA!!!'' a young girl screamed Alex thought she was dead but then thing's changed a young teenage boy ran out there ''Don't shoot papa!'' the15 year old screamed yeah that's right, Will ''Hello Im Will and i can see from your ears and tail your a demon ,well half demon an-'' before he could finish he found himself pinned against a tree ''DON'T EVER CALL ME THAT AGAIN MORTAL!'' Alex growled ''OK sorry if you were offended .'' Will said .''Come on you want ot get going lets go before the real bad demon's come.'' Alex foolishly said .Just then a arrow come darting through the air of course Alex dodged it but did Will ,Of course he didn't it went straight through his shoulder ''UGH''Will groaned in pain just then a shiny yellow jewel fell out of will's pack the oken jewel ''it's mine ''Alex said ''NO UH BAD GIRL''just then right when Will said that Alex was pinned against a tree ''come on'' will said ''Don't tell me what to do'' she said as her red kimono floated in the gentle breeze just then a knife came darting through the air but sadly Alex had her back turned it hit her directly in the back Alex tumbled to the ground is this the end of Alex the dog demon ? TO BE CONTINUED....IMEDIATLY! ''UGH!OW!son of a b***h.''said Alex Will reached into his knapsack and pulled out a rag and some fluid.*Swoosh* an arrow flew throgh the air and peirced Alex's kimono.''s**t .Kid get me out of here'' as she said that a old haggetybird flew through the air cackling ''so alex whatcha up to.'' it said cackling evily. ....................We will be back
- by XxEmilyof-theDeadxX |
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- | Submitted on 09/06/2008 |
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- Title: The Dog Demon
- Artist: XxEmilyof-theDeadxX
- Description: OK so its about a 12 year old dog demon and a 15 year old named Will when there worlds colide it will seem like Inu Yasha to all those fans i mean how awsome is he yeah well just read it its awsome
- Date: 09/06/2008
- Tags: demon
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Kekui - 09/06/2008
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i liked it, but it was like you were speaking:
tons of run on sentences - Report As Spam
- XxEmilyof-theDeadxX - 09/06/2008
- HI umm ok well hope you like it
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