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Chapter 1
My name is Miku Hinasaki and im looking for my brother Mafuyu Hinasaki. The last i heard he had gone to investigate the disappearance of Mr Takamine at the Himuro mansion, but from wat i heard its dangerous there. Its been a week since my brother went after the researchers into the Himuro mansion, now its my turn to go in looking for him. I came to the front doors, i could feel my heart throbbing in my chest, i was so scared and nervous, hearing about all the happenings. From wat i heard the master of the house suddenly went crazy and slaughtered the 76 people that lived there, something about taming the evil spirit. Well i slowly twisted the door handle and walked in, the first room was dark, ceiling pillars had fallen down and the place was decaying. I had no torch with me, only my brothers lighter, i pulled it out my pocket and lit it, it helped a bit, but i couldnt walk around this place with just the lighter. I decided to scout around the place for a torch before looking mafuyu, i carried on through a door that led me into a room that looked like a dining room of some sort. There was a staircase leading up and a door at the opposite side of the room. Gut instinct told me i should go through the door, i always followed my gut instinct no matter what, it has always got me through some tight spots. i entered the door on the other side of the room while keeping in mind that i was only equiped with a lighter. I slowly turned the knob, not knowing what was waiting on the other side, i entered into some sort of hallway, there was ropes hanging from the ceiling and a large mirror at the end of the hall. I carried on down the hallway,i suddenly caught a glimpse of something hanging from the ropes, it was..... , it was a human, there was someone hung round the neck by the ropes. He suddenly called out to be, i tried to reach the ropes, but i couldnt reach, it was no use. And i heard the most horrible sound ever, all the bones in his crunching, and then death. i stood shocked, i couldn't believe what happened. I couldn't move, i looked away, not being able to face the horror anymore. I quickly took another glance at the man and....., what, he had gone disappeared, theres no way he could have gone anywhere without me seeing anything.
i was scared out of my skin, i was sure he was dead, i couldn't understand how. I got up and slowly moved towards the mirror, still dazed by what happened. there was a torch on the floor, it had a name tag stuck on it, it read, property of Mafuyu Hinasaki, my brother, so he was here. i put the lighter back in my pocket, and switched on the torch instead. There was nothing here so i decided to head back the main hall,but on my way back i saw a figure slowly moving towards me. he looked somehow familiar, and then i realised, it was the man from the ropes, how could he be walking towards, and i realised which made me freeze with fear. He wasnt walking he was floating, like, like, like a ghost. I couldnt beleive what i was seeing, it cant be real i said to myself. I sat down with my head down, and kept telling myself it wasnt real,and when i looked up i was face to face, i screamed and quickly ran for the door. i burst through and landed on the floor, the figure had gone again, vanished. i was back in the main hall and it seemed i was safe for now.
Chapter 2
I was back in the main hall, i turned my head right to see a shadow of my brother walking up the stairs to the second floor.
To be concluded
- by swifty07837 |
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- | Submitted on 09/11/2008 |
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- Title: tormented souls - chapter 1
- Artist: swifty07837
- Description: plz read tormented souls - intro before reading this, it might help u understand a bit better. this is chapter of my book, i dont know when i will be writing chapter 2 but just be patient and wait, ok :)
- Date: 09/11/2008
- Tags: tormented souls chapter
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Comments (4 Comments)
- ElvenFalcon - 01/08/2009
- Do the next part ! this was really good and I do not , as a rule , like ghost stories razz
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- swifty07837 - 12/30/2008
- ok, i need some self esteem to do the next part, so if u liked this chapter plz tell me if u would like me to do more, thankyou
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- swifty07837 - 12/29/2008
- i aint had me lappy for ages so coudnt right next part soz, will be righting chapter 2 some point this week
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- swifty07837 - 09/13/2008
- plz comment on wat i could improve smile
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