- "Mom?"said the young princess of Esperia.Her name was Ginger and she was 10."Yes dear?""I dressed in my kimono and i put a sakura cherry blossom in my hair."Oh thats good hon.""whats wrong?"she said looking at her sickly mothr."ohh-Ow umm nothing hon"she said with a grin but you could tell she was in much pain."are you sure your okay?""yes of coarse dear""well ill get you your breakfast this morning""oh thats so sweet of you dear."Ginger went off to get her mothers breakfast."lallalala"she sang skipping down the hall.Her mother smiled in bed and closed her eyes."shel make a great ruler."Rumors of evil spirits coming and haunting and even killing the living have been spreading."haaaaaaaaaaa"a strange voice whispered in her mothers voice."im here remember me?""Whaaa?!who are you? a ghastly spirit rose from her side."dont you remember dear?of course no one remembers me!everyone ignored you broke my heart!""William?!a tree fell on you you were dead?!""I am you imbasille!the rumors of the spirits are true""AHHHHH"William was a loser who was in love with gingers mother who was ruler by blood.her name was Marian.But Marian fell in love with another boy who was gingers father ,James who was killed by spirits."Well the regections are over!If you love James somuch you can meet him in the after life!""Wait you were the spirit who killed him !""well duh lady""you can kill me but dont hurt my daughter Ginger.""Oh Ill get her ....Wait you had a kid!Oh come on!well ill only kill heer thats good enough.""No!!"William pulled a dagger out of his spirit mouth and headed toward the kitchen"no!!"he approached Ginger"Wha AHHHH MOMMY HELP!!""the spirit threw the dagger at Ginger.""NOOOOOO MY BABY!!!"her mother threw herself infront of her child just before the dagger hit"AHHH""AHHHHH MOMMY!!""Dangit!!!"Ginger became mad and very very sad."You killed her!"Ginger turned red and then her powers kicked in she blew out flames and sent the spirit back to the spirit ralm."Mommy!"her mother lay dead on the floor.She cried and cried after the offoritys came Ginger,the 10 year old was announced ruler."For you mother and father I will never let you down"she said to herself being crowned.2 voices whispered to her" of coarse you wont"Ginger looked to see her parents spirits smile to her and leave into the clouds "MOMMY DADDY"she cryed of joy.To see her parents again..
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- KayleyV2 - 12/26/2008
- Can you try formatting this please? It is just a wall of text right now, and very difficult to read. Using paragraphs is something that I would recommend; heck, spaces in general are pretty nice tools when composing literature.
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- mommyissniffer - 11/26/2008
- Nice sissay!
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