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Disclaimer;; I don't own New Moon.
It's been awhile since she heard his beautiful voice. She longed for it again, although this went against all her rules. She could hear him now clearer then ever before, she felt the hole in her heart tear open more from the absorption of his words.
"Bella stop, please keep your promise." It sounded in her head.
Walking towards the edge of the cliff Bella peered over into the water. Out in the far distance she could see a effulgent light just on the other side. Fear flashed threw her eyes, at the thought of Victoria. She knew she would be coming soon, but she couldn't bare to think about when this could be. Maybe, just maybe she was better off letting Laurent kill her that time in the forest.
Bella took a running start toward the cliff, Edwards voice repeating in her head telling her not to do such a treacherous thing like this, saying keep your promise keep your promise. Bella continued running remembering she got what she wanted, but this wasn't enough. She knew Edward was never coming back but she was in denial. She didn't want to belive it, it was such a horrible thing to think about.
Bella hurled herself off the overhang, the waves sucked her under, gravity pulling her to the bottom. Bella struggled to the top trying to catch a breath, but she soon the light was not visible. Edwards voice was even stronger then before, it was as if he was right there. Bella was soothed by the sound of his voice she lost sight of what was happening, she had given up.
"Bella NO don't give up. I love you, I love you Bella please. Don't drown." The voice pleaded. Then only seconds later,
"Bella over here, quick breath!" Bella opened her eyes and went unconscious.
"It's been hours, I'm worried! Is she stable? Is she even alive? Are you sure Alice was right?" This wasn't the same smug... wait Alice? What did they know about Alice.
"Edward... ?" Bella cried out confused. Was he back, was he really back. No it's impossible he was gone, she thought she must have died the second the conclusion came to mind.
"Shes awake! Oh my sweet Bella I thought you were dead. I don't know what I would have done if you were really..."
"Edward! Your back! Right?" Bella squalled.
"Yes Bella I'm back, I'm so sorry! I'll never leave you again, I promise."
Jacob! That was the first thing she thought of... Edward was back and she was thinking of Jacob. No matter how strange this seemed to her she had a sudden out burst of what might of happened...
"JACOB?!" Bella questioned. "Where is he, why isn't he here?"
"Bella I'm sorry. Jacob is dead."
- by hardxcorexrainbow |
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- | Submitted on 10/12/2008 |
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- Title: New moon FanFic Ch.1
- Artist: hardxcorexrainbow
- Description: Edward Has left and Bella Befriends Warewolf Jacob. Bella is doing reckless things to hear Edward in her head.
- Date: 10/12/2008
- Tags: moon fanfic stephaniemeyer twilight eclipse
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Comments (3 Comments)
- -Broken Demon of Death- - 10/12/2008
- Awesome, though, from writer to writer, I think you should add a few more describtive words, maybe what Bella sees, and maybe even a few more words from Edward in her head. But that's just me. ^^ Other then that, it's awesome! 5 stars!
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- Xx-Azn So Fresh-xX - 10/12/2008
- yes i agree this story is interesting.
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- ruby_angelqueen - 10/12/2008
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that was good
very interesting
i liked reading it and the shocker at the end
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