The Worst New Year Ever!

• Artist: Nicole Marie Wood
• Description: Someone dies.
• Date: 10/17/2008
• Tags: worst year ever

"This is the best party I've been to this year!" Abby shouted over Demi Lovato singing. "In fact it's the only party I've been to this year!"

Then all of a sudden the lights went off. Everyone was questioning "What was that?"
There was a big BOOM! The lights came back on and everyone ran out screaming.
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BEEP BEEP! BEEP BEEP! Klaire's pager went off. Klaire looked down at the pager and it read:
MUDER ON MAIN STREET
"We need to go to Main Street Marie." Klarie said.
Klaire started the car and they were on their way. Klaire was driving her Mustang Convertible with Marie in the passenger seat.
"Are was almost there? I want to make some money here!!" Marie exclaimed.
"Marie you don't get paid." Klaire said in an 'DUH' voice.
" I know."
Klaire rolled her eyes. They arrived. Marie jumped out of the car.
"Hold on Marie!" Klaire yelled.
"Sorry." Marie apologized.
"It's OK but just chill!"
"OK I guess."

Chief McDonald stepped up tp Klarie and Marie.





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Comments

[Fantazz Randomness]

hm... im intrigued. I'll have to start my own story. I have one written down in a binder called "Twilight Kisses". Great beginning, it's veddy, veddy intense. SHVAWESOME!!!

[Ray the Good Soldier]

It seems a little spars. More detail could definately improve this a lot.

[kovujackson]

im a bit confused..... are these your characters or gaias's? this may be an obvious and dumb question, but a question none the less.

if these are your characters and this is an opener for a book/comic then i would suggest more description as to explaining why these two would automatically go to the murder scene.

again if the characters belong to gaia then that would already be taken care of wouldnt it wink