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Nanette (Nan)
Michael
Leon
Joy
Olivia
I stared straight back at "new kid". I got off the bus, eyeing him and sizeing him up. My best friend, Olivia, joined me in staring at him.
"He looks kinda emo," she murmured to me. She glanced around making nobody heard.
"He looks different and weird. He looks kinda...dull," I replied to her. He kept staring at us and often turning back to talk to the principal. When we reached inside of the building, the bell rang suddenly, making me drop all of my papers from the suprise. I saw Olivia come and help me and so did "new kid". I glared silently at him without saying one word to either of them.
"Thanks," I muttered to "new kid" and walked off. He followed me until i turned around with fury flashing dangerously in my eyes.
"What do you want?" I snapped. I glared at him and drummed my fingers on my binder.
"New kid, get lost and go to class! Your making me late as it is. Shoo! Get!" I hissed. He just kept staring at me with cluelessness in his eyes.
"The name is Leon," He said slowly. He eyed me and scowled.
"I don't care! Get lost, I need to go to class!" I shouted. I searched around and the hallways were deserted and lifeless like the moon. I could smell smoke from the "smoke house" and hear teacher's yelling at students.
"Stop calling me "new kid" goth girl. I have a name unlike you do," He sneered and walked towards the different direction.
Oh, how I longed to start a fight with him. I wished I COULD have started a fight with him, but i was 10 minutes late and my science teacher hated me.
I ran towards my class room and settled down into my sit.
"Your late Miss Rodriguez," Mrs.Borski said while writing down on the board about the Co2102 cycle. Then, she turned around and gave me her why-in-the-hell-were-you-late stare.
"New kid helped me pick up my books and kept following me. So I got mad at him because he followed me and called me goth girl," I replied but with not enough madness in it that i wanted.
"Take a sit Miss Rodriguez and catch up!" She yelled.
I rolled my eyes and got out my books. I turned to page C49 and started reading about the CO2102 cycle. I read about on how it was formed and eventually got bored after 7 pages. I glanced at the clock and was amazed at what time it was. 9:37, 3 more mintues until algebra.
"Nan, here it's from Olivia," Joy whispered to me and handed me a note. I nodded and read the note under the table.
What happened between you and "new kid"?
heart Olivia
I looked around before replying.
He just called me "goth girl", followed me around like a dog, make me late, and try to think he was tough stuff. All he proved was that he pissed me off and he smelled like a piece of s**t.
-Nan-
I folded it up and jabbed Joy with my eraser.
"Here," I muttered. I watched as she passed it on to Olivia. Olivia unfolded it, paused, and burst out laughing.
This cause Mrs.Borski to look up. She gradually came over smoothly and towered over her.
"What is so funny that you caused the class to stop learning?" She demanded.Her black eyes searched around like a vulture and focused back on her.
I saw a tuff of white sticking our between her thigh and chair.
"Good thing she was sitting on the note," I whispered to Joy. Joy looked and giggled a little
Mrs.Borski's mood didn't brighten and she was about to ask Olivia the question I always hated and always had to answer. "Why were you laughing and if you have a note share it with the class or you'll get suspended," question. The bell rang and everyone hurried to get out. Especially Olivia.
"Olivia!" I yelled. She shot her head towards me and cautiously crept towards me.
"Yeah?" She asked.She looked around and we leaned our heads together.
"Let's go find "new kid". He obviously has a name now. Leon the new kid. I want to straighten him up before I go to algebra," I urged.
She nodded her head and laughed.
"Okay, watch out Leon the new kid, here comes TROUBLE!!" She shouted loudly.
"Okay, i'll teach him a lesson for calling me goth girl," I vowed
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- by Kiaku Kiba223 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 11/25/2008 |
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- Title: Love Story (Chapter 2)
- Artist: Kiaku Kiba223
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- Date: 11/25/2008
- Tags: love story chapter
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Comments (4 Comments)
- LittleePandaa - 05/14/2009
- yeah i liked it =)
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- Adzarka The Dark Assassin - 12/04/2008
- I'm sorry but it wasnt an interesting story, nor could i understand much of any of it.
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- Kiaku Kiba223 - 11/26/2008
- well when you read the story you can tell by their talk and motions. if i just plain out told you what happened,then it wouldn't be good. do u get me?
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- Lolvy - 11/26/2008
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Interesting, but writing style needs to be more clear. We wanna know their feelings.. Does she feel angry, hatred, embarassed? Is she eager to hurt leon back? Tell more please?
2 stars - Report As Spam