wolf. Chapter one.

• Artist: The Forgotten Nightmare
• Description: Start on a book.
  Not so good.
  any suggestions, make sure you put them in the comments. =)
• Date: 11/28/2008
• Tags: wolf chapter

Three things raced through my mind.
... where was I.. What am I doing here... and .. What was I.
These things just kept running through my head.
I attempted glance around at my surroundings.
My eye sight wasn't really great at this point.
Trees?
A forest maybe?
What the hell would I be doing in a forest?!
And why.. in the middle of winter, do I feel so warm, and why can I smell water.. and hear it so clearly like it was right beside me.
I decided why not try to get up.
As I shifted my weight to one side, I stumbled back to the ground.
Four... legs..
I could swear I could feel another pair of legs.
I stood up, after maybe 20 times of trying to get up, but I was closer to the ground then expected.
What the.. hell is wrong with me.
Finally my eyes refocused.
HOLY MOTHER OF!
I had paws.. and a tail.
I turned around glare at this thick black furry thing.
Please tell me this is a dream.. PLEASE!
After turning around like a freak for 5 minutes I calmed down.
I decided I'd lay down and die.
20 minutes later, I'm up and pacing back an forth.
two things..
one.. I was a wolf.. two.. I needed to figure out how to turn into a human again, and fast.

Comments

[Sapphire Water Angel]

coolllllllllllll

[Unknown Millenia]

it's really great and has a lot of voice. please keep writing this story.

[E x i t i n g]

I'm kind of unsure about the smelling water. Would you really know that you were smelling water if you were smelling it for the first time? You might want to describe more without saying it's water. Or maybe by just saying it's a strange smell. It would make it a lot more realistic.

[dino_duDe]

nice story^^