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A girl named Emma went to a crowded school that was named Dimmitt Middle School. Every day she dreamt of what her true love would look like. It was February 14th Valentine’s day when she saw a guy next to the lockers she nearly walked past him when her text books fell.
The guy who she hanging out next to the lockers came over and he helped her pick up her books their hands both touched as they both reached for her binder. "Here are your books" said Jeremy. Emma was so nervous she was speechless
never in her whole life was she nervous until now. As they both walked to class alone Jeremy thought how HOT she was and Emma was thinking about how cute he was. They got to their class the bell after the bell just rang they both got detention. They were shocked to see each other in detention the seats were arranged in rows they sat in the back side by side. Emma and Jeremy started to pass notes to each other they were love notes saying how Jeremy was sweet, cute, and funny. Jeremy wrote how Emma was so down to earth.
They both liked each other but they didn’t know they both liked each other the next day. Jeremy told his friends how Emma is so down to earth and hot she was then his friends were like do your crushing on her and then he was like no I’m not then his friends were like yeah you do then Jeremy was like fine I do I can’t help it she’s so hot . Emma was with her friends also then she started talking about how Jeremy was so cute, funny, and sweet .Emma’s friends were like someone’s been bitten by the love bug Emma was like I know I've been bitten because he’s just so cute and I never thought any guy was cute until now .
Emma’s friends and Jeremy’s friends started to talk to each other and say how Jeremy LOOOOVVES Emma , then Emma’s friends were like no way she’s been say how Emma LOOOOVVES Jeremy .The friends were trying to get them together so Jeremy’s friends told Jeremy that Emma’s friends told them that Emma likes him.
The next day he asked her out they went out they went to Thomas Teasdale
Park. Their friends were watching them while they were on their date. The friends were hiding in the bushes and trees. While watching them when it was 5 there date was they kissed softly. They went back to school the next day years 12 years passed Emma was 22 while Jeremy was 23. They got married in Hawaii and had 3 kids. heart heart heart
Jeremy and Emma are the happiest couple in the world.
This story was inspired by "You Belong With Me" By Taylor Swift
- by CandyCane000 |
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- | Submitted on 11/30/2008 |
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- Title: Love Story
- Artist: CandyCane000
- Description: It's a Love Story!
- Date: 11/30/2008
- Tags: love story
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Gewrin - 10/21/2009
- The beginning felt very real but then later on it became a "girl's dream that would never come true". This is like a manga or anime romance. But I liked the story, but too short I guess. I expected drama. Anyway, oh yeah! I go to Dimmitt also! Perhaps you go there too.
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- Blkauh - 06/22/2009
- Your story has some bad grammar. Just looking at it, it shows no commas.
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- Aryn Michael Flynn - 05/31/2009
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i wuv it biggrin
so sweet - Report As Spam
- Ray1248 - 05/07/2009
- As a boy's opinion YUCK!!!!!!!.As my proffesional opinion first paragraph is expected you see it on tv ALL the time plus what is with the he was like........and she was like.......and they were like.......you're telling a story not talking to your friend.It was a boring but has potential.
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- ciara montanna - 04/16/2009
- keep going why did you stop please keep going
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- Fairest_of_the_Fallen - 11/30/2008
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aawww its so sweet
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- CrystalMayer - 11/30/2008
- Awww this a really great lov story.Keep up the great work
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