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JESSE'S VIEWPOINT
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Jesse,
i'm sorry, but there is no other way to say this.... But our friendship is over. I already found a new best friend and i just don't us as friends anymore. Take care...... Goodbye, see you in school.
Yours truly,
heart Maii
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"I-t's o-ver......," my voice cracked as i said those two words. Maii and I had been friends since we were babies until now. Tears came down like a waterfall when i thought of Maii. Her sweet smile, with her ocean blue eyes blending in with her bleach blonde hair. My whole body felt so sore, i never felt this sore before. I knew one thing..... that life would be difficult without her and i was DEPRESSED. I was living in a nightmare for sure.
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The whole night was like a never ending nightmare, i was tossing and turning. These memories of Maii kept on coming back to me, and i wept the entire night. I couldn't really get any sleep and tomorrow was the firstday of High School.
- by Angel_Of_Witness_Patrol88 |
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- | Submitted on 12/04/2008 |
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- Title: it's over (Part 1 The Note)
- Artist: Angel_Of_Witness_Patrol88
- Description: "Tears came down like a waterfall as i read Maii's letter to myself. My whole body felt so sore. " please comment...............
- Date: 12/04/2008
- Tags: life friendship
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Comments (5 Comments)
- AntiAntiKitsch - 07/01/2009
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Very short...
Please capitalize the letter I, and include some more detail so we can get into what the characters are like. What memories did Jesse have of Maii? Why does he think that she abandoned him etc... - Report As Spam
- T-T_hEaRtBrEaK_T-T - 12/08/2008
- as miki said...too short...but i like the name maii...i personally think u shood leave it! and PS call me chrisy
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- Angel_Of_Witness_Patrol88 - 12/07/2008
- For the two ppl that first commented, thx for the feedback and i will try to make my story parts longer from now on
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- xxFiRe-x-IcExx - 12/07/2008
- true dat Miki
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- MiKiiHenderson - 12/06/2008
- Um...too short. And you should change Maii's name. Maii doesn't sound like a name for a bleach blonde bombshell of a girl.
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