-
Eva stiles: a 16 yr old android. blonde hair, blue eyes, about 6"1 tall, and just like every other android she was due to expire eventually. The worse thing about it is... she and a human are in love.
Raiden : a 15 yr old human(but he posesses unnatural strength and speed). Black hair, brown eyes,fair skin, about 5"10. And a curse he brought upon his self, He and a android are in love.
AND NOW FOR THE FEATURE PRESENTATION!!!
The day was thursday, December 12, 1808
The day that I ( Eva stiles )
Was due to die...
It was a day very much like today.Windy, dark, and storms were due. Me and my boyfriend Raiden were sitting in a circle of cherry blossom trees. I think the time was 3:42pm and today was the day that I was scheduled to die. I must admit though, I was always curious of how I was going to die. Explosion? Car crash? Shooting? Old age? Well anyways, There was an intense tornado warning but me and Raiden payed no attention to it...We should have.
At somepoint around 3:57 I noticed a slight change in the motion of the clouds. They changed from a smooth and calm horizontal motion to a furious and deadly swirling spinning motion. Then it hit me like a truck going 95 mph. "Tornado." I whispered softly almost silent to myself. The swirling funnel touched the ground in what seemed like less than 3 seconds. "EVA! C'MON!!" Raiden was screaming frantically while beckoning me to come to him. As soon as I turned to go to him I heard a groaning sound and a loud crackling noise.
I turned on my heel immediatly, Just in time to see that the tornado had lifted a Toyota Camry right off the ground and had sent it hurling straight towards me.This is it, I thought I'm going to be crushes by a camry It was about 100 yards away now. "MOVE, EVA! GET OUTTA THE WAY!!"Raiden's frantic screams filled my head. I tried to move but my legs just wouldn't budge. It's like my feet are glued to the ground 15 yards.
"EVA!!!!" Raiden screamed sounding like he was getting closer.The last thing i saw were the cherry blossoms swirling around me.
. . . .
When i woke up the first thing I did was check the date. December 21, 1808. I let out a long sigh. Then it hit me. Raiden...Tornado...Exp date...? "RADEN?!?" I asked loudly while looking around frantically. "Raiden?" Tears started to swelling up in my eyes. "...Raiden..." I bursted into tears and then a nurse wearing all white came into the room and asked in a fake sweet voice "Sweety what's wrong?" I wiped my eys and in the same fake sweet voice asked "Was there anyone else in the park with me?" Almost shocked she replied "Why, no, you were all alone." sadly I answered "oh...ok....thanks I guess...." Then slowly I shooed her away. Then I looked down at my watch and changed the time to midnight, then pushed in the button and my holographic lifespan appeared Hmm........ December 12, 2008.eh?....
(12 days later)
"You're free to go now Eva" The nurse in white said in her fake sweet tone. "Thank you very much." I replied in the same tone. I slowly walked out of the hospital doors. My black Ford Mustang was waiting in the hospital parking lot. I sure hope I remember how to drive I thought; trying to remember everything dad taught me. I got in the car and put the key in ignition. I slowly pulled out of the hospital parking lot and onto Groove street.
(15 minutes later) I pulled into my driveway, got out of the car, went inside,took a shower and put on some new clothes.Then I went back outside and got back in the car and drove solemnly to the park. When I got there I sat in the same circle of cherry blossom trees as when me and Raiden sat here together. Just as the cherry blossoms fell, so did I, into a deep deep sleep.
(50 yrs since i was to die)
Today, December 12, 1858. I lazily get out of bed and get dressed. Afterwards, I let out a long sigh."huuu, 16 forever....forever to be without the one you love.....and to dread the past." I mutter as i apply my eyeliner. I grab a poptart as i walk out the door. (15 minutes later) I pull into the park parking lot. I look at my watch.hmmm......7:29 I grab my backpack and sling it over my shoulder. Then I climb out of the car, close the door and lock it. Casually i stroll over to the circle of cherry blossom trees and sit down inside the circle.
I sit under the same tree that me and Raiden sat under. I reached in my bag and pulled out a book and a blanket. I then leaned back against the tree and opened the book and started to read it. I was so caught up in the book that I didn't even notice when the wind started to swirl and howl, even though it sent cherry blossoms swirling around me. What DID get my attantion was the feeling of a familiar presence in the air. I looked around trying to locate where it was coming from. Then,Finally, I found it. My head snapped up to face the woods across the road.
Then, I saw movement in the dim woods and slowly a shadowy figure (who's walk seemed unnaturally familiar) appeared out of nowwhere but what caught my attention was that directly above where he walked the sky was perfectly clear, but the sky around it was in a rage.Then i noticed something else he was a strangely close to around 6"2 and he was wearing a hoodie and mask. Who is that....I know that walk......? I kept asking myself over and over. He was only about 15 yards from me now. I slowly got up and stood by the tree. He was about 5 yards away now. I reacheed for the pepperspray in my pocket just in case I needed it. He was right beside me now. "honey, im home." He whispered in my ear as he took of the hood and mask. "RAIDEN!!!!!" I exclaimed before I tackled him
[if i get some good comments and ratings then i might think about making a sequel]
- Title: The Last Hour
- Artist: Repulsing
-
Description:
well during chorus i had the idea of turning on of my characters most tragic experience into a story
and so during the 4 1/2 hrs of after school chorus i wrote this story
[yes i know i left alot of details but yea... - Date: 12/11/2008
- Tags: last hour
- Report Post
Comments (4 Comments)
- Xx asiandoll xX - 01/19/2009
- that was a gud story! make a sequel!
- Report As Spam
- Gothic_Chibi_Chan - 12/23/2008
-
*claps claps * woah this is good
sooooo long thow sweatdrop whee
chu got talent - Report As Spam
- Repulsing - 12/18/2008
-
PEOPLE COMMENT ON MY STORY
- Report As Spam
- pavonia - 12/12/2008
-
Dish a good job sissi ;3 *pats head*
Like I said, a little bit of work and it'll be perfect! ;3 - Report As Spam