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Me, my wife, and my three sons have always lived on the main street, until "it" happened. Every day me, Tom, my oldest son, Greg, the middle child and, Ben, the youngest would go and play catch in our front yard. Greg was trying to show me how fast he could through it and threw it in the street, I didn't see and cars so i let Ben go get it while i stood on the side walk and watched for cars. Screeching around the corner of the intersection came this white truck he had to be going over 70 miles per hour. I yelled to Ben to move but it was to late I cringed once I saw the impact, and saw his body go limb. I ran to his side and checked his pulse we later found he had died on impact.
(Im going yo write more here but don't know what yet any ideas?)
Ever since Ben died we have been trying to move out of the house. We thought that was it for him we knew there was no way, no miracle to bring him back. I was with Tom and Greg when everything i believed was completely turned around. Greg and Tom were playing catch and i was watching them over the pages of my book. When I thought I saw Ben at first I thought it was my imagination until i saw him catch the ball that was rolling into the road. I heard a loud bang from down the street and saw a man with a gun and turned my head to see Ben laying on the ground I jumped out of the seat then he disappeared.
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- Title: Eleven ways
- Artist: Xo_MOB_ACE_oX
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- Date: 12/12/2008
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- Unlike_the_deaths - 12/27/2008
- Sad sad 5/5 poor ben read mine orange soda and fight for the sky (they are not sad well one is just fighting) smile
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- XxShiro KuroxX - 12/25/2008
- - all i can think of, hey maybe if u read some of my stories u can get some ideas.... they are The Day The Legend Came True, then to read the 2nd and 3rd ones just add ~2 and ~3 then read them plz.....
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- XxShiro KuroxX - 12/25/2008
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i have a suggestion for ur 2nd paragraph! ok here it goes, ill allow u to copy and past it if u want!
Right after we called the police and the (were ever u get funeral reserves or watever) to make seservations, it will be held on the next Saterday. It has been so lonly, and nonstop sadness in this family ever since. The sad part was Ben wanted to be (wat ever u want to put).
Now since we are alone, we shall pick a new place to live.....
1 YEAR LATER....(u can put this maybe)
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- Princess x Yuki - 12/14/2008
- That was good 4/5! In the nxt one, you should make the man with the gun your husband or somthing!
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- Xo_MOB_ACE_oX - 12/12/2008
- haha my bad im not really the best speller and i rely on spell check... ill fix that lol
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- Agent_O_cokepower - 12/12/2008
- lol fyi a "seance" is a ritual through which you contact spirits smile
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