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David looked out the window only to see nothing but darkness. He wanted to see what the snow looked like when it was falling. David had heard all the kids talk about how beautiful the snow looked but he could never see it for himself. His mother told him that he didnt need to see the snow but just to believe that it was there. David tried but somehow he just couldnt bring his self to believe that the snow was there. One night David heard a noise coming from the living room. Daivd walked down the stairs feeling the walls to make sure he didnt fall. As David reached the living room he could hear a girl singing a song.
-Away in a manger no crib for a bed
-The Little Lord Jesus lay down his sweet head
-The stars in the sky shine down where He lay
-The Little Lord Jesus asleep in the hay
"How are you" David asked after the girl finished the song.
" Well Daivd I'm your gardien angel." The girl said turning to David.
" What is your name." Daivd asked still trying to keep a straght face.
" My name is Beth." The girl said," Cant you see me standing here?" Beth said.
" I'm sorry but I cant see anything for I am blind." David said.
" Dont be sorry Daivd. I should be the one askiong for your forgivness. I shouldnt have been rude to you like that. For your kindness I'll give you anything you want." Beth said sitting down on the couch.
" I would like to see my frist Christmas snow." David said.
" Daivd I dont know if I can do that but I'll try." Beth said.
On Christmas morning Daivd got up to see that he was still blind.
-well at lest I tired.-
" Daivd come down stairs and have some breakfast." Daivds mother said.
David walked down the stairs and saw something for the very frist time. David could see the snowflakes falling to the ground. The flakes lokked like mini dancers flattering in the breeze. Daivd could tell that this would be the best Christmas ever.
- by Vampire_Panda14 |
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- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: My First White Christmas
- Artist: Vampire_Panda14
- Description: Hey everybody,Im back. Ok this story is basicly a Christmas story. I figered that since its almost Christmas that a christmas story was in order. This story is about a little boy who is blind and all he wants for christmas is to see the freashly fallen snow. I hope you enjoy this story. I f you want to ask anything just pm me and Ill be happy to answer your questions.
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: first white christmas
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Manorah - 12/25/2008
- i liek it..not that bad..but okiy..
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- Fayne Darkness - 12/14/2008
- its not bad really good but you made spelling errors but i like it 4/5
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- Dr Luna Cuddy Md - 12/13/2008
- very good I love it ! 5/5
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