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I couldn't believe that he told me that I was feeling love. What I heard was nothing like this:
I felt like everything was okay, like I was never going to die. I felt like my heart was warm and never going to stop.
I guess its different for everyone.
"Yeah," Kale told me, "Rainbow means love, sometimes silver, too,"
"I think mine are switching back and forth," I told him "I can feel it,"
"Let me watch," he told me. He stared deep, and I could feel it.
Not only did he stare at me, I stared at him, with loving eyes. I was sure of it this time. I didn't blink once.
He tried to get into a conversation, "So, whats the name of the evil vampire coven, coming to destroy you?"
"The Vansheir Vampire coven,"
"Oh, I've heard of them," He paused for a moment, "Hell, I've even fought with them before!"
"Really?" I was intrigued.
"Yeah, in a wimpy street fight. They're really weak, compared to us. You could probably beat them all up, yourself."
"Oh, I don't think so," I started to blush.
"Oh, yeah, you could," He twirled my hair with his finger.
"Oh, I'm pretty weak," I started to flirt. I broke a little giggle.
So did he. "Concerning your threat at the shed, you definitely could. You're a little stronger that I am."
"Oh, yeah right!" I looked at his shirt.
We came together, and took a kiss.
His breath was soft, reassuring, with a tingling sensation I had never felt before.
Then we heard a huge boom.
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- Title: Rainbow Blood Pt. V
- Artist: x iMuse x
- Description: my fifth part in the rainbow series!
- Date: 12/30/2008
- Tags: rainbow blood lynnsheiko vampire avain
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Zucchera - 06/23/2010
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The only thing that I didn't like about this was the "huge boom" thing. Onomatopoeia annoys me personally, but I think especially in this situation, something more like "that's when we heard the explosion" would work better.
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- Britbratbrianna - 06/28/2009
- I like it...it's also like a story I read that the creator might like...Night World...it has a soulmate concepet and that's what this is reminding me of...Once you see that person it's like a strike of lighning hits you and you immedaitly know that person is the one for you...now going to the sixth...
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- princessrp123 - 05/01/2009
- it's good. only one thing i would change; It's kinda creapy to fall in love with someone after only knowing them for a day. you should extend their time together
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- CapnBuBu - 12/30/2008
- zomg! THIS ROCKS~!!
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