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My alarm clock rings loudly causing me to slam down hard on the snooze buttn to silence the racket. i open my eyes to a bright day, i stumble out of my bed an quickly get dressed in a T-shirt and sweat pants not really caring if they match and head out of my room to get ready for school. i look in my brothers room to see he is still sleeping and that annoyed me more then it should have even if he said he would drive me to school. instead of going in and waking him up i decided to just leave him be for the time being and find all my things and not forget my books again. i ran down the stairs and find a note on the kitchen table with my name on it ... ~the note reads~ "ont canr drive you to school today long day at work your loving brother". i was now firious i was going to be late now because he wouldnt drive me to school, i now quickly found every thing in a pile near the door my mom must have put it there she was always peranoid that i was going to forget somthing and she was right. i ran out of the door and ran all the way to my school ... 30minutes late and to tired to even walk i enter my class and lucky me its socials the class that the teacher wants you to remember things you were not around to actualy see. i was glad still that this teacher never payed much attention to the students and had a movie in so i was even more lucky, my friend Annie was in her seat she is the normal smart girl always on time, glasses, and straight A report card with a book in her hand were ever she went. no one really payed much attention to us and i liked that i was always the quiet type and so was she, i met her my first year here reading a book under a tree moving her lips to the wrods but saying nothing i never knew why people did that it always looked like a blurr to me."were have you been ont class started so long ago" "sorry my brother didnt wake upso i had to run here" "well dont sleep in just because you think you had a ride next time the teacher marked you here lucky you" "yea im glad im here most of the time the teachers just expect me to be there". class wasnt over for another hour and the movie was so boring that most of the class fell asleep and were startled by the bell rining for break. Annie never hesitated inbetween break she went striahgt to class and waited for the bell. while it was break i always went into the boiler room to escape the busy hallways the janitor gave me a key so i could get in and out when i ever i wanted, i went to unlock the door to find out it was already unlocked. i decided that i would jjust lock up afterwards the janitor must have left it unlocked by mistake, i walked farhter in and heard some one talking near the open space were i alwys sat so i hid behind a large pipe and peeked around the corner to see who it was and it wasnt the janitor it was some boy sitting around jars that looked like they were filled with herbs and powder. he was sitting next to a star most likley made from the powder he had with him and he was muttering a language i never heard before and started to throw the hurbs in the star and i saw them all dissapear into thin air, as he threw more and more herbs into the star the ground started to shake and if felt like an earth quake . the shaking got worse and worse and i tripped and fell from my hiding place out towards him, he looked up in shock and lost his concentration and just stared at me. he got up and started to walk towards me and i ran i could hear his footsteps behind me as i left the boiler room and was shocked when i saw that there was not damage to the school and not just that students were walking by like nothing had even happened. then the bell rang confused and scared i ran to me next class.
(k i know my punctuation and all that sucks but if you like it so far plz do tell)
- Title: like it and ill add to it
- Artist: ontinashi
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Description:
this story is about a girl named ontinashi who goes along her normal boring life with her best friend annie and every thing seemed to go great ... until he came to our school every thing started to change and im mean every thing
(this is a normal i think normal manga type thing just no pics and more writing xD) - Date: 01/01/2009
- Tags: will more peopl
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Comments (4 Comments)
- LbootsO123 - 10/22/2010
- Yeshhhh addd more its prettiee Goood
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- Ranakai - 01/03/2009
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Nice story. If this continued, I would definitely read more.
Two things:
1. Almost all of the sentences start in "I". I would change up the sentences.
2. Grammar and punctuation is a little messed up.
I'm definitely keeping track of this story. It's a winner. - Report As Spam
- Adriana Pineda - 01/02/2009
- its a good story
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- Damaged123 - 01/01/2009
- WOW i luv ur story
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