Few Days With Him!

• Artist: CravesTheMoon
• Description: it's the beggining of it, but i think it is good. tell me what you think. its about a girl who saves her favorite singer, Michael Mitchell, from a car wreck and they find them selves in love! But Michael has a girlfriend. Will it work out?
• Date: 01/02/2009
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I was an ordinary teenager. I got good grades, mostly As. I listen to music. I watch TV. I do what normal teens do. Like most girls, I fantasize about a celebrity. His name is Michael Mitchel. In my opion, he is the best singer in the world. Well I shouldn't call myself, ordinary, I actually did stuff thats EXT-ordinary. This story is why.
I was listening to "the god" while flipping through a magazine that I have read a gazillion times. That's when I heard a crash. I ran downstairs and out the front door. I didn't put on shoes. Outside was a crashed limo! It was gorgeous even though it was totaled. I ran to the seat closets to me. I flung open the door and inside was, him. I was shoked with horror. I rolled him out and on to the grass. He wasn't breathing! I gave him CPR and (On the lips of course!) he awoke, sorta. He was unconsious. I ran back for the driver. He was unconsious too......

Comments

[MyNameIs-Scrotes]

delightful...

[Lost-in-Dreamland-again]

Didn't like it, sorry. Need more detail, a longer introduction, and you have a few spelling mistakes.

[aeusnthaeo]

Spell check, kind of like an atomic bomb or condom, is something that should be used much more often than it is.
Other than that, it's passable. Not much more to say about it than that.
(By the way, unless your room is right next to the street with a window open and a vent going down to the street, I doubt it would fill with smoke from a limousine crashing outside).

[stop reading my name]

:^D thats a good story 5/5