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I finally got to Lily's house. Her house was bronze copper with a tint of gold. It was not very big only had one floor, but it was nice and snug. I walked up to her brown door and rang the doorbell. I waited another 5 minutes then rang the door bell again...hmm...I told her I was coming over around 3:00...I looked at my watch just to make sure yep...3:00....where is she? I wonder if the door is unlocked...I slowly reached my hand towards to golden door. I slowly opened it...to see Lily on grown with blood dripping from her neck...my eyes widened and my breath became short...I started to sweat...everything started to blur...I fell to my knees.....I held my head tightly...I sent of blood was making me dizzy...I couldn’t take it! The smell was like rusted nails and rusted metal! I felt my nose start to bleed...the blood dripped onto Lily's living room wooden floor...I put my hand over my bleeding nose trying to stop it but i couldnt....my head started to spin...i felt like i had hit in the stomach by a rino...then everything went black...
I woke up in a hospital room...the room was crystal white and had one window to the right of the room...i turned my head to face the window...it was beautiful...outside it showed the sweet honey trees...the calm and collecting pine trees...and my favorite the oak tree...i watched the trees blow with the wind...swaving back and forth....i heard my door open...i looked to my left to see a man with jet black hair and bright green eyes he looked about 30 years old. he smiled at me, "hey! how you feel!" he walked over to my bed and pulled a chair o sit in. "so! do you remember anything?" should i lie? yeah! yeah! "uh no" "Oh...well Lily's mom came home and saw you two bleeding on the ground....she tryed to wake up up but she couldnt...so she called the police to help...." oh no Lily! "Lily! is she ok?!" "Well....she hasnt woken up yet..." "how long have we been out?" "about a day" i sighed. i wonder if shes ok..."why hasnt she woken up?" he shook his head, "i dont know...she lost a lot of blood..." i sighed, "ok thank you for telling me..." he got up from his chair and walked to the door "Oh! i forgot my name! im Dr.Flinn" he didnt turn to me he just walked out of the room....
- by Xx OneMoreTime xX |
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- | Submitted on 01/31/2009 |
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- Title: love story part 11
- Artist: Xx OneMoreTime xX
- Description: part 11
- Date: 01/31/2009
- Tags: love story part
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Comments (2 Comments)
- jsonnia_94 - 02/07/2009
- Okay. The division of the story is not done very well. Still can be improve. 3/5
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- la Reina de calabaza - 01/31/2009
- Cool! 5/5
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