TheLegendOfTheRareBlackRose

• Artist: Astral Phemo
• Description: This is the story where there is a girl jealous of another girl.............
• Date: 02/01/2009
• Tags: legend rare black

Once upon a time there lived a girl named Roselin Bear
she was as beautiful as an amazing and nice rose
she was nice as sweet as a Honey and Smart like a Dog
She was a top student in her school until she became valedictorian
in her grade school after that she went to Middle School.............

After she graduated in Grade School her attitudes has changed
since her last attitudes we all know that Roselin Bear is beautiful,
sweet, smart and nice but it changed to "Sour as an Onion Cruel as
a snake and disgusting like a POOP" That's because of her jealousy

Before those attitudes came this the story............

She went to middle school this spring she was so beautiful all
of the boys in their campus liked her all of them there were rich and some
are billionaire and some are multimillionaire but one day Roselin
fell in love with a multimillionaire boy that he changed Roselin's
Attitudes but their relationship didn't last.................

One day when Roselin went jogging in the night she saw her loved one
having another girl with him that's the time she decided to change her attitudes..
she told herself ; "I should have revenge to my sweet love" but after that she went to school
and she set chaos in her school and when she got to the school garden some
College boys raped her and digged a hole in the garden and buried her
body after that all the student to pass that garden always saw a
Black flower after 2 weeks they know what is buried there it was Roselin Bear the beautiful to Jealous that's the legend

SO DONT BE JEALOUS OR YOU MIGHT END UP LIKE HER

Comments

[Machiavellian_Prince]

It was a good stopry concept, but your grammar absolutely sucked. And the flow of the story seemed very halted and broken. And you might want to change the simile that says she was smart like a dog. That doesn't seem all that smart to me.

[Cl3v3rRey]

Now really that is possible but not the rose part.

[ftw989]

I LIKE HOW THE WHOLE BLACK ROSE THING THATS AWESOME

[meerodi]

Scary! But it's creative!

[Margo Blue]

i liked it even has a moral!