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Chapter 1: six days after
It had been six days since the destruction of the city of the mika nekos, under dimming sun light olny flat land could be seen, where once tall bulidings stood there was nothing but rubble. Under the setting sun blood that had stained the bits of broken rubble looked black and ink like, it seemed as though no one had lived after the collapse of the city. Every thing was quite there was no chirping of birds or the sound of the wind rustling through the trees, it was as though the surrounding forest was morning the loss of the city and its people. Just then the rattling of some loose rubble broke the impending silence and a hand burst free from one of the many piles of broken buildings, a young boy about 17 pulled him self to the surface and threw himself on to the top of the pile of debris under which he had been buried. Breathing heavily he slowly sat him self up and took a long look at his surroundings, “everything’s gone” he thought “my home, my family every thing” he then stood up to get a better view of what was once his home, when the reality of what had happened finally set in he fell to his knees and began to sob “all of this really happened” he sobbed “im not dreaming, I only wish was!” by the time it was dark he had finally calmed and stood up once he knew his head was clear, he looked out over the horizon, his blue hair being tussled by a light breeze and his yellow eyes still clouded with tears he drew in a deep breath and said “ I will find out what happened six days earlier, I will revenge my people I swear to it! Or my name isn’t kin hoshi!!!”
- by blackmagic2005 |
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- | Submitted on 02/08/2009 |
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- Title: The day the city fell
- Artist: blackmagic2005
- Description: this is the story of a young half cat half boy who has become the last living of his people after an unknown power distroyed the city he once held dear and the people he loved, and now sevral days after the disaster its all up to him to learn what really happened that day, and what really distroyed his beloved home!
- Date: 02/08/2009
- Tags: city fell
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Comments (4 Comments)
- neoplasma - 06/15/2009
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so far A++ i shall move on to the next chapter soon BHWAHAHA
i think i should make that my signiture..... anyway GREAT JOB!!!!! - Report As Spam
- blackmagic2005 - 02/14/2009
- thank you!!!!^^
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- elcidd11 - 02/13/2009
- it seems intresting keep up the good work
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- blackmagic2005 - 02/10/2009
- i would love it if i could get some more ratings for my story, comments are loved as well, and please no harsh comments! thank you^^
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