- I walk down my spiral staircase in my Fortress of Midnyte. My chores are done, now all that is left is to reflect on my master's departure. It has gone to battle the evil forces of Lyte, taking its expendable minions with it. I am a sorceress, and therefore not expendable. How I wish to be in battle with it! For it to sharpen my hearing and give me my special kind of sight. We would overwhelm the battlefield! The Darkness and its sorceress. But it's all right, it should return soon. Reminiscing has begone to bore me, so I use my powers ton put on a show to entertain me till the next day, for I never sleep. Suddenly, a dark behind my eyes. I start to lean backwards and Darkness catches me. "My sweet." it croons. "Master," I whisper, "you are back!"
- Title: My Master, the Darkness
- Artist: Witch112
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- Date: 02/17/2009
- Tags: master darkness
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Witch112 - 02/26/2009
- Oh, Diana42, you hardly even know me.
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- Diana42 - 02/21/2009
- There were more than just spelling errors in here. Not only that, what have I told you about expanding your work? Who are the characters? What are they? What are they doing? What is their purpose? All of these questions need to be answered before anything happens. I love you in a friendly way, but pull it together, man.
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- Witch112 - 02/19/2009
- Sorry, Halie895. I'm new to this. I admit that it is not the best work I have ever done. I even counted two spelling errors!
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- Halie895 - 02/17/2009
- the title sounded cooler. just a friendly critic, do not send me a nasty comment
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