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*Introduction*
The tall old Wizard thumbed through some parchment on his cluttered Desk and read over The inked cursive writing,His eyes covered by his long white scraggly hair,and his beard lined with streaks of silver, He twirled the end of his beard and Placed down the parchment in a
sigh."Its so unfortunate what has happened." He whispered under his breath, A little white mouse with a red bow tied around its neck scampered into the room It Brushed at its
Face...Suddenly ,in a pink swirl, it Became a little girl with white hair and a white dress that went about to mid thigh,"Sir is there something that is troubling you? Nyook..." The girl whispered tilting her head slightly."Yes Mariea There is something wrong The Fairy godmother...." Mariea straightened up a little "i see..Shall i?" She said
As if reading the wizards mind.The wizard nodded slowly and scratched under his beard,
Mariea once again changed back into a mouse and Scampered out through a hole under
a book shelf..
~Else were in the kingdom
The little red hooded girl Most know as Little red riding hood Skipped on the dirt trail to
sir Marcuses' house To deliver some goods from her mothers bakery, Her hood draped over her head she looked absolutely adorable.Her dark brown hair blew in her face as a dark wind blew over the Fairyland "What?..." little red questioned looking towards the winds direction,
seeing nothing she shrugged and skipped onward.The wolf sat in the bushes shadows and peeked over at the hooded girl "Haaa haaa...Today or tommarow i WILL get that little tidbit....Haaaahaaa..." The wolf was clawing a plan in the dirt when suddenly he thought 'why cant i remember my plan from yesterday?' he pondered until he decided it did not matter and went on coming up with a needlessly complicated plot
~near the 3 bears house
Goldilocks walked along her Pigtails bouncing in curls as she walked along the road bending down to pick things up every now and then just to forget why she was holding them and throw em, down. Eventually se came across the three bears house and as you know
She Enters the house and Falls asleep and such, Asleep in the littlest bears bed she
dreamt of remembering, In this fairy tail she could never remember She would often forget.
She wished she could remember why the whole thing felt so familier and why she could not remember the day before....
~On the road to town
Jake ,the farmers boy and the florists son, Was on his way to town to sell his mothers only cow for times were hard for the family and they had nothing more to give. Jake is a foolish boy He had given up half of jacks ,his fathers name, fortune for a bag of candy and snuck some gold to pay his friends back,Unfortunately He gave them too much WAY too much like
3,000 dollars worth of gold too much. Well as you know The boy sells the cow for beans
and whatnot Well as soon as Jake had reached town he forgot what he was doing so the chance never came....For the time.
-More will come but for now we wait
~End of first intro
- Title: just ever after
- Artist: Nyaph
- Description: I know it not incredible but hey give me a break : )
- Date: 03/06/2009
- Tags: just ever after
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Comments (2 Comments)
- T R l X X - 03/06/2009
- It sounds interesting, Nyaph! I agree with alainlalaland in someways as well. Anyways, you can have a huge future ahead for you if you apply your creative mind, and you AWESOME drawing skills. wink Hope to see more from you! 4laugh
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- alainlalaland - 03/06/2009
- First of all, you shouldn't bash yourself and claim the story is bad before people read it. It's not a very good atmosphere. Second, I think, that after a bit of grammar work, punctuation/capitalization, and some more details, this could be really good. So work on those, and post away! smile
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