- Once there was a 16 year old girl named Jesse,and her father Joseph. At her sweet sixteen, her father was busy with business calls. Jesse asked after he got off the phone "dad did you get the cake yet"?"Im sorry, i was busy with work i forgot your cake, im going to get it now"said her father while putting on his coat. As he walked out the door jesse said"remember the party starts at 7:00 o'clock ok". "I wont be late"said her father as he waved.As he was walking down the street he heard a noise coming from the bushes.He walked faster.When he was out of breath he stoped to rest.Then he heard a twig snap,he walked nonstop until he got in front of the store.he went in and looked for the cake his daughter wanted. After he bought it,he went outside,he was looking to see if anything was there.He sighed and went home for the party.he was walking on the same street where he heard the noise.he felt heavy breathing down his neck,he stoped and turned and dropped the cake ,he gasp as the creature stood 9ft tall.he roared as he ran after Joseph. Joseph was out of breath but didnt stop running.when he didnt hear anything he turned to see if it was still chasing him,the creature disappeared. He stop to catch his breath when he heard a roar and looked up to see the creature lunged at him from the building. He screamed and had been bitten on the arm.The creature was going for his chest when a car past, the light from the car scared the creature away.He ran home while his arm was bleeding. When he got home jesse asked "hey dad you get the.....". She gasped and ran into the bathroom to get a rag. She quickly called 911.When the paramedics came they loaded him up in the truck and drove off.
- by Xxwolfy13Xx |
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- | Submitted on 03/24/2009 |
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- Title: The full moon
- Artist: Xxwolfy13Xx
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A 16 year old girl named Jesse and her father Joseph. her father was attached from a mysterious creature.
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thanks - Date: 03/24/2009
- Tags: full moon
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Asura_Ruler_Of_Insanity - 05/19/2009
- need more of a cliff hanger at the end but i liked it.
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- moonlightwolf111 - 03/24/2009
- good start keep going
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