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A handsome young man at the age of 32 ran quickly across the rocks. He had long, blond hair that seemed to touch the ground whenever he stopped running to catch his breath. He also wore a pretty much torn-up blue t-shirt with a pair of gray slacks. He all of a sudden stopped running when he got to a cave. He rushed in and was pulled in at the same time. He sat down and leaned against a boulder. A young female neko at the age of 28 sat down next to him. She wore a black leather dress and it seemed as if the dress had a bunch of belts on it. She also wore a black leather coat that also seemed to have 60 zillion belts on it. She had long blond hair and brown cat ears(she's a neko DUH).
"WHEW!! Man, I don't think I should EVER steal a loaf of bread a couple eggs and meat from the mountain tribes AGAIN." the man said,"Well, Sarah, at least I made it out alive again." The neko grinned at him.
"Well, Harakan, you don't seem like you wanna give up do ya?" she said. Harakan then smiled and gave her a little kiss on the cheek. He then got up and tilted his head.
"I think I heard something..." he said. He then walked out of the cave and went towards the sound. He then saw something in the distance.... intruders.
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"I'm telling you I saw something move really fast at us." Hinr told Samantha,"Besides, you know I WAAAAHHH!!!!" He was rudely interrupted by someone rushing at him and knocking him over. It was Harakan!
"LEAVE THIS MOUNTAIN NOW OR WILL BE FORCED TO EXECUTED YOU!" he yelled at Hinr. Hinr then got up and looked at Harakan angrily.
"Well, my name's HINR, and I'm the PINCE of HALKAGSNA! So, now I DEMAND you to LEAVE us ALONE!" he told Harakan. All looks of hate seemed to have gone from Harakan. He then smiled and gave Hinr a huge hug.
"HAHA!! I REMEMBER SEEING YOU IN A DIAPER!!!" Harakan told Hinr,"I remeber you, little brother! Except you don't remember ME, because I was banished when you were 1 1/2 years old..."
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"So THIS is who you talked to me about" Sarah said as she looked at Hinr.
"If you would permit me to say, is your name Sarah?" Samantha asked Sarah. Sarah nodded. She looked over at Harakan, who was watching the rain fall onto the rocky mountains,"So I guess that really is Harakan..."
"Um, okay we might need to turn off all lights because there are torment troops heade our way! Quick, Samantha, turn off the lights!" Harakan said. Samantha turned off the candles so the cave was as pitch black as the deep sea....
- Title: Torment 10
- Artist: Mthieu7
- Description: This my tenth episode of Torment. This time, we take a look at Harakan. Turns out, his life is all about war and surviving in the mountains....
- Date: 04/02/2009
- Tags: torment
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Happiest_Dark_Neko - 04/09/2009
- pretty good, so far, just work on grammar. BUT GOOD.. i love it so far
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- PrincessJesyxoxo - 04/06/2009
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yay. i got to read it after soooo long! lol
it was good, but dont really say how old they r like how u did it, make it blend in razz just saying. lol u dont have ta listen to me - Report As Spam