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Taken
Shikura and Yuki were just about to leave for a B- rank mission. Their mission was to go to the Sand Village for a special mission that the Kazekage has assainged them. They haven't even been told what the mission was, so the two of them were looking forward to it.
"You ready Yuki?" Shikura asked.
"Hell Ya!" Yuki announced and threw her fist in the air.
"Um, you kind of look like Naruto when you do that you know..." Shikura said annoyed.
Yuki was 15 years old with red hair, and red eyes. She was also extremely loud.
Her friend Shikura was also 15 years old and had black hair and blue eyes. Yuki always told her that she acts just like Neji Hyuga.
Shikura sighed.
"You two leaving already?"
The two of them turned around.
Kononha's one and only "Destiny loving, genius" was walking towards them.
"You bet Neji!" Yuki yelled.
Neji and Shikura looked at each other with annoyance.
"I guess there was destined to be another Naruto." Neji sighed and smirked.
" Be careful you guys. The Akatsuki have been quite active lately" He warned the two of them.
" Will do Neji!" Yuki yelled and ran into the city gate.
" What have they been doing now?" Shikura asked as she shook her head.
" They have been killing more people and kidnapping some for ransom. Be careful, they could try to go after you."
Shikura nodded.
" We'll look out, you be careful to okay?" Shikura smiled and Yuki saw Neji's face turn a little pink.
."Are you blushing, Neji?” Shikura asked with a smirk.
"Uh uh, no, I'm just a little feverish." He replied quickly. Shikura and Yuki weren't convinced.
After about 3 hours of running, the sky started getting darker.
"WE SHOULD STOP NOW!" Shikura Yelled to Yuki who was much further ahead.
"OKAY!" Yuki yelled back. They settled for a nice small clearing with a hill that they could keep watch on all directions.
"Hey Shikura," Yuki asked as they set up their camp. " I think Neji likes you, he didn't look feverish to me at all, what about you?"
" I don't know, he was probably just embarrassed for being to specific about warning us. But I know one thing is for sure!" Shikura said.
" What?"
" You have a Major crush on.....GAARA-SAMA!" Shikura teased.
"So What, you have an even bigger crush on ... who do you have a crush on?" Yuki asked as she tried to make up a good come back. Shikura just sat there, with an annoyed look on her face.
"I'm not telling you, because I know you'll black-mail me 24/7!" She joked. There was an argument on why Shikura should tell who she likes.
"Fine, I like-" Shikura said as she gave in, but was cut short as two dark figures came out of the underbrush. The People who came out of the bushes were wearing black cloaks with red clouds.
"Well if you'll look at that, I think we found them." The man with blue skin said as he pointed at Yuki and Shikura. They let out a small gasp, to small to be heard. Shikura remembered Neji's warning earlier that day before they set off.
"Yuki," Shikura whispered. "We should really get out of here, they're Akatsuki members. Neji warned us about them this morning remembered?"
"Yeah I remember. But I'm not scared, I'll take on all of the Akatsuki right now!" Yuki Shouted.
"Keep you're voice down!" Shikura hissed in her ear. Yuki and Shikura started to walk towards the woods when they were stopped in their tracks.
"You two aren't leaving are you? Because we need to ask some questions." The black haired Akatsuki member said.
" Yeah. Are you girls called Yuki Hatenki and Shikura Higurashi?" The blue one asked. Yuki and Shikura looked at each other and nodded.
"Yes we are." Shikura replied.
" Good, come with us without resistance, and there will be no blood shed."
"NO ******** WAY ARE WE GOING WITH YOU! YOU'RE AKATSUKI MEMBERS!" Yuki yelled in defiance.
"Yuki settle down, it doesn't look like they will hurt us for no reason."
"But Shikura, Neji warned us this morning, they'll probably take us for ransom!"
" Now now, I never said that I would go with them, so save your energy for when you see Gaara."
" But how are we going to get away from-!" Yuki was hit from behind. Shikura was ready but was attacked from underneath the ground. Everything was blurry as Yuki saw Shikura fall to the ground unconscious, and was lifted up by the black haired man. At that same moment, she was picked up by the blue one...
- by Kieru Dir en Grey Andou |
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- | Submitted on 05/10/2009 |
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- Title: Kidnapped
- Artist: Kieru Dir en Grey Andou
- Description: This is a little story (not finished btw) that i wrote and yah...lol hope u like it so far!
- Date: 05/10/2009
- Tags: kidnapped
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Comments (1 Comments)
- XDSmart - 11/27/2009
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there's too much dialogue and not enough senceroy details. your story should have more details also there's no piont if view because there's no i's or any sign of a narrator dialogue should be "sprinkled" on your story. Look at it like this your story is like a cupcake and dialogue is like the icing/sprinkles who woul want a cupcake with too much icing/sprinkles
But i really love the plot and the direction it's going in.
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