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Chapter 1
I couldn't move, I just stood paralyzed in fear. It moved closer and let out (what I think) was supposed to be an evil laugh. Then my legs started to work. I sped to the rght into a crowd of people who were screaming and running. I saw dead bodies laying on the ground and my heart hurt. I knew, I was too late, but I couldn't have completed my mission in life, could I? No, that was the answer, no. No.No.No. The word rang through my head over and over again. I screamed out of frustration as I pumped my legs harder and felt the burn in my thigh. Then I skidded to a stop and peeked around the corner of the alley.
Maybe it was hiding, maybe it stopped following me, maybe it was about to devour me. I wouldn't know unless I took a risk I ran into the alley and saw eyes staring at me as I passed by. Then I stopped as I saw a pair of red eyes look at me. They closed and when they opened they were purple. I sighed and the voice said, "Quick, come with me. it isn't to late." I tip-toed into the dark abandoned house. it was falling apart and there were cobwebs everywhere. I heard the distant screams and moans as people out there died....because I hadn't completed my mission...my mission in life.
- by lo_la_di_da |
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- | Submitted on 05/17/2009 |
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- Title: My Life As I Know it
- Artist: lo_la_di_da
- Description: uhm......I'm doing chapter by chapter, ta-da! I ALWAYS end my chapter in half a sentence and then finish it in the following chapter that talks about something completely different (except for in this chapter, because it's the first one).......I don't know, hey, I was bored!
- Date: 05/17/2009
- Tags: life know
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Spicy Shark Plushy Queen - 02/26/2010
- Hey nic eu posted ur work! great way 2 get it out there. I TOTTALLY think u should do more every thing u have ever read 2 me is music to my ears. remember that 1 time where u read that story u wrote and u said it was rediculouse i did'nt think so ( i mean if u actually remember lol lol ) and don't call me cheesy!!!
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- Calimouse - 06/14/2009
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I like this line: " I screamed out of frustration as I pumped my legs harder and felt the burn in my thigh."
This reminds me very much of the movie Manticore that I saw on Sci-Fi a couple of months ago. - Report As Spam
- lo_la_di_da - 05/31/2009
- OMG. someone actually read this!!! THANX!!!!!!!!!!
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- Aroused Nintendo - 05/31/2009
- i liked it. keep it up!
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- lo_la_di_da - 05/20/2009
- uhm...IF you do read my writing...Can you add a comment? I really want to know what to do better and what I did good......well, yeah...
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