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Fallen
Chapter 1
I walked through the streets, not knowing where I was. There were blinding lights everywhere. There were people screaming at the top of their lungs. There were also strange people everywhere. Many where half naked and probably drunk. I looked up and saw that the stars were no where to be seen. The sky was a deep blue, thanks to the lights from all the city lights.
I, in a white, baggy, long-sleeved dress, walked on, oblivious to the fact that a drunk man was following me. I turned the corner and saw that there I was in complete darkness. My long, curly, black hair shined behind me, making it hard for the stalker man to see me in the dark.
I turned and saw that the man had many other people with him. "Look over there!" he shouted, "That girl... I want her!" After hearing those words, I carefully walked across the brush. Okay, walk quietly... quietly...
I must have taken a wrong step, because I suddenly heard a different voice shouting, "There! I see her! Think of all the money we'll get from that drunk idiot if we catch her! Go on! Get her!" he shouted as they all charged at me. Except he didn't say idiot. I stood there, not knowing what to do. Why me?
"Look out you idiot!" was what I heard when I suddenly fell on my back. I sat up and saw there three boys fending of the huge men. "Run!" one of them shouted, "Go to the pier! We'll meet you there!"
"You p-promise?" I sobbed, moisture building up in my eyes. "We promise! Now Go!" the boys all yelled together.
Before they could even finish the sentence, I stood up and ran as fast as I could away from the fight.
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- by Hibiscus_Blossem |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 05/18/2009 |
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- Title: Fallen Chapter 1
- Artist: Hibiscus_Blossem
- Description: I got bored... So I decided to write a story. Please comment so I can write better please!
- Date: 05/18/2009
- Tags: fallen
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Meggie Marie - 04/21/2010
- It does sound pretty good. Did you write more? And if you do PM me please ^_^
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- Broken Blind - 05/18/2009
- hmmmmm... i like, interesting. u should continue
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