- as i waited for my girl i felt a burst of happiness for she said she had a surprise for me she seemed very happy to say so. but one thought broke my giddyness. what if she wanted to break that dropped my confidence by 10% but i still had the other 90. As i approached the bench in the park she was waiting at my temperature dropped greatly but i still had my happiness when i sat down i asked what the surprise was. i expected to hear her speak but instead she grabbed me and gave me a tight hug. the kind you can't get free from. her head was so close to mine i can hear her breath. thats what it should sound like only there was no breath she was very cold to touch. then she spoke. she said "have no fear" then i felt something lick my neck. it was like a dogs tongue only it was hers then i felt a fierce pain dig into were she had licked and the last thing i remeber was my scream for help and then there was darkness
- Title: Then There Was Darkness
- Artist: eiromeir
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- Date: 06/08/2009
- Tags: then there
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- eiromeir - 04/28/2010
- hey purple lady shut up this damn site has no spell check and frankly its the story your suppose to COMMENT,not the spelling
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- purpleinuyashagirl - 06/15/2009
- Work on grammar, capitals, placement of punctuation more... Higher vote next time maybe... 2/5
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- Kika93 - 06/09/2009
- o0 woah
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