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the one night ill never forget it when it was on Friday the 13th. I walked in my room and got on my wonderful, magnificence new night gown. When i went to bed i look around my room and i saw a face. i blinked really fast and looked over again. It wasn't there. So i went in my closet because a cold rush of air came by and i got cold. i look in the closet and out of 1 minuete i only saw black. i was so scared and someone told me "why hello there". i started to scream and my dad came rushing into the room. He said "Carmen are you there?" and i started kiking the door. the mysterious black cloaked hockey mask man kicked me with such fearce. I sarted to scream more. my dad came to the door and saw me. standing there so helpless and he decided to ask me what hapended. i told him and he said "honey i think you just had to much cotton candy." so i went to bed. i feel asleep for a few, so, 1 hour? When i woke up after sleeping for a hour i started to freak out. I looked around and i saw faces everywhere! i started to get up, slowly,i creeped under my bed. Then it was under there. he said again in his low toned voice "why hello, nice seeing you under here CARMEN. i screamed and kiked him as hard as I could. I said "WHO ARE YOU?!" and he said "why im lucky Jason". I said "LEAVE ME AL-! and all i could remeber was me and the "lucky" jason under my bed. Next thing i know im in a tunnel. i shake my head rapidly. i started to run as fast i could. Then he was in my head. Jason was there. I just sat there. layed on the floor. And.....
THE END!!!!
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- Title: The Night Its Happended
- Artist: GMod-4617-3723
- Description: This is a story about when the night it happended and i will never forget that one night
- Date: 06/11/2009
- Tags: nights waited
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Comments (4 Comments)
- CalvinRexx - 04/26/2010
- Your grammar, punctuation, and spelling all need work. You've got a huge wall of text here and that's not something I should be seeing. Generally, when writing a story, you have have paragraphs that contain at least five sentences. Now, putting that all aside, this was very interesting. 2/5
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- Dolly Akezai - 06/16/2009
- LOL nice story.I'm a writer,try to get better with your "I" And read over.3/5
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- ThIs_ChIcK_Is_BoSs - 06/11/2009
- wow dj u should beome a ritter or a lawyer but that wAS AWSOME
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- GMod-4617-3723 - 06/11/2009
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hello! this is my first entery and im not that good at writting stories!!i hope you enjoy it and if you have some hints or your entrey feel free to tell me!!
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