- I readied my club, waiting to strike until a long whip snatched it from my grasp. A girl stepped in, her beauty only matched by the radiance of her smile. A powerful aura emanated from her. She motioned me to follow her, and I was entranced to do so. My first steps out of the chamber were like my first steps ever. I continuously lost balance and fell a few times. The girl didn’t look back, yet I could tell that she knew I was following her, like she put some sort of trance on me. An alarm sounded, and she screamed “Hurry up and don’t come back!” I ran fast, but she ran faster. I saw the exit, but two guards jumped out of nowhere. I clobbered one with my club, but nothing happened. I expected the girl to attack them with her whip, but instead, she pulled out a sheet of paper with a bloodhound on it. I was blinded by the bright flash of light as she shouted “Head for the exit, leave them to me.” I couldn’t see anything, but I dashed forward, using the different levels of light shining through my eyelids as my guide. I heard violent barking, and limbs being torn. I heard a scream, and decided to go back in, but remembered her words, and stopped. After a few minutes, everything fell silent. Out of curiosity, it went back in, despite everything that just happened. The corridor was empty, but I made up my mind. She saved my life once. Now it was my turn.
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- | Submitted on 06/11/2009 |
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- Title: Skystreaker - Chapter 2
- Artist: alexanator8797
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IMO, it's not as good as the first chapter, but I was kinda brain-dead when writing it. I might decide to revise it later, but probably only after I finish writing the rest of the chapters.
If you want more, help support me by checking out my wishlist or sending me gold! (I'm only a noob T_T) - Date: 06/11/2009
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Ninlynja - 12/27/2009
- keep goin'! wink
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- Ashley-Abandon - 06/21/2009
- that was not poor..very good..
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- inuyasha luffer - 06/11/2009
- it's really good I love it ^.^.... i want to read more >.>
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- alexanator8797 - 06/11/2009
- To make up for the poor quality of this chapter, I'm gonna start on chapter 3 now.
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- Bloody Times - 06/11/2009
- that was a good read, nice joib!
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