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A boy lay in bed one day. He heard his sister call him downstairs. He sat up and noticed that something seemed different. He had that feeling that something had greatly changed in his life. He walked downstairs and there were tons of people in his house. He found her and asked her what was going on. She took him out for a drive. When they got to his favorite ice cream store, she looked him in the eyes and said, "Kenshin, i know its hard, but im afraid i have some bad news. its mom and dad. we got a call from them." Kenshin's face lit up. he asked her why that was bad news and she said: "it wasn't from mom and dad. it was the police. they found them by the lake. dead. im sorry kenshin." she hugged him and let him cry into her shoulder for at least ten minutes. after that she picked him up and took him back to the car. she told him she would be right back. she closed the doors and locked them so no one would take him while she was gone. she walked into the ice cream store to buy him his favorite triple chocolate caramel swirl ice cream cone. kenshin waited for twenty minutes. after that he unlocked the door and when inside. he screamed as he pushed open the door and found what was inside. He was now totally alone. she was murdered by her boyfriend who was waiting inside for her. kenshin was alone. he lay on the floor crying, trying to wake up from the bad dream.
(to be continued)
- by the key to chaos |
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- | Submitted on 07/01/2009 |
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- Title: alone
- Artist: the key to chaos
- Description: you don't need a description. read the poem and youll understand.
- Date: 07/01/2009
- Tags: crushed
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Alice M Summers - 05/10/2010
- it sad, but i like it
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- PoisonousMoonlight - 01/24/2010
- hmm you need description, no seperate paragraph for dialogue here, no paragraph change, overall horribl i'm sorry but it just stinks. great thought but I don't think this is your thing...
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- KandieCandy - 07/08/2009
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Very... spooky.
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- Xxx2Goth Princess2xxX - 07/05/2009
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Wow.Cant wait for the rest.But wow.
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