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Chapter 1:
I looked up into the sky breathing hard, its been hours and i still hadnt made my way home... I'm lost again, my mom must be worried
I heard a twig snip behind me and i whirled around to face the introuder
It was... a boy no older then I "Who are you?!?" i demanded
"Morning Idel" he whisperd.. strange name "And you are?" he said louder
"Nolla Obel" i said bluntly, as soon as i said my name his eyes widend.
He knew who i was then heh, did i not mention i was a Vamp? oops.. oh well
you know now then
"Your Nolla then... my target" he said with a small grin. it was my turn to be wide eyed.. Sudennly he lunged stake at hand
- by Neapolitan Sash |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/07/2009 |
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- Title: Taken
- Artist: Neapolitan Sash
- Description: Vamps kidnapping murder its got everything! chapter one!!!
- Date: 07/07/2009
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