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Hi! my name's kyohei. Have you ever experienced something weird that happened in your life? Like getting suck into another world or dimension? no? well, i have.
I was walking down a street in Japan, when, suddenly, I felt like something bad will happen. I continued to walk, then a deep black hole opened under me, and i fell right into it. "Aaah! somebody help me! " I said as I continued falling down into the deep black hole. At that moment, I thought i was going to die; then while i was falling, I saw someone familiar to me and cried for help. That's when i realized that it was Kiri Koshiba from a manga called " Beauty Pop." But she just kept on walking until all i could see was nothing. Then, suddenly i saw a little light coming and thought that it was the way out but it was a trap! You know why? Because when I finally got out of the Endless black pit of death, i saw clouds, blue sky behind me, in front of me, and on the sides of me.. then THATS when i realize... that I'm actually falling from the sky! "Aaah! what did I do wrong? " i said, as im falling, again.
To be continued....
Help! need assistance! i'm not sure how to continue my story... so anyone who's interested can PM/ private message me to give an opinion or advice on how i can continue this...
AWARD: u even might be in my story if i like ur advice and wrote the 2nd part of my story...
note: beauty pop is a manga. u can look 4 it online. if u don't like it then don't comment. (i'm NOT being mean. i'm just saying that.)
- by kyohei hyuuga |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/18/2009 |
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- Title: Dream/Anime World
- Artist: kyohei hyuuga
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Description:
Where: a street in japan, my house, dream world
When: morning at saturday
Major characters: me and people who is with me all the time..
Plot/problem: I walking in the street of japan, fall down from a deep black hole, get stuck into another world/dimension, and don't don't know how to get out. - Date: 07/18/2009
- Tags: dream anime world comedy action
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