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The moon shined hauntingly down upon a grotesque scene of death and decay. Beams of light gleamed eerily off of rotting marionette strings, long out of tune guitars twanged jarringly, and the steady sound of flowing blood could be heard. A normal night for the damned. The macabre dance had been going on for an eternity, the same every night, stopping at the first light of dawn, starting with the emerging of the first star, the band slowly starting up, limbs of the only remaining dancer creaking stiffly as they moved into the well practiced routine. And as she danced, jerking hauntingly across the floor, oblivious to the eyes of the long since immobile bodies strewn out of the way, a single man laughed. It was a cold laugh, blood chilling and venomous, soft and confident, yet it rang eerily across the room, bouncing off the age-mottled floor and fraying curtains. It drew no reaction, as expected, and he proceeded to stride carefully to the lone figure, still dancing, to take the place of the invisible partner.
"May I have this dance?" broke the silence, that had only just now returned, in a low, seductive, and teasing voice as he took his place, on hand wound around her cold waist, the other clasped in her dead hand.
And they danced, master and puppet, gliding through hell, over the blood, ichor, and decay, her stained dress dragging, fraying even more where stepped on by her partner, only for him to leave again with the first rays of light, an unspoken promise on his lips to return tomorrow.
Throwing one last glance over his shoulder at the puppet slowly falling in a heap, he left.
Until tonight.
- by Space Saliva |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/20/2009 |
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- Title: Dance of the Damned
- Artist: Space Saliva
- Description: Somebody asked me to write a short story based off of a picture once, and now, going through my computer's attic, I found it and decided to post it here. ^_^
- Date: 07/20/2009
- Tags: dance damned
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Peek Aw Chu - 08/03/2009
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As dude said below,
you created a lot of emotion, setting, and empathy with the reader automatically.
I enjoyed the song-like nature I found to it.
When i heard it I imagined something of a music-box style thing. . .
But sadder.
If that makes a lick of sense.
I think you just made music without making it. Haha. - Report As Spam
- Purple-shoes616 - 07/30/2009
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This is very very good
you established quite a bit for a piece of such short length
skillfully done
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