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"You want me?" I repeated in a whisper. He leaned in close to my face. His breath passed over my face and I lost my train of thought. Cold lips pressed against mine. I gasped. He started kissing me harder and rougher. Then I finally remembered that he wasn't human. I started struggling against him and he moved his lips from mine to my neck quickly. This is not good, I thought, not good at all.
His breath was getting heavier and he started panting. "S-stop!" I yelled trying to push him away. He pressed harder licking my neck. Then, just as I expected, something stabbed into my neck. Fangs. I screamed. "Get off, you're hurting me!" He sucked harder clutching me to him with extreme strength. The blood loss was making me weaker. "You're going to kill me" I whispered. That's when he froze. He pulled away from me with blood dripping from his mouth onto his shirt. I was starting to lose consciousness. "I'm so sorry" he whispered. Then, from the second time that day, I fainted.
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Do you like the story???? Read on if you want to! Sorry if the
parts are short I don't have that much time all at once!
- by lvhtjsnlwys101 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 08/04/2009 |
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- Title: Secret House: Part 2
- Artist: lvhtjsnlwys101
- Description: This is part 2 I hope you keep reading!!!
- Date: 08/04/2009
- Tags: secret house part
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Comments (3 Comments)
- pinkdog99999 - 08/12/2009
- jolly good
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- GopherNugget - 08/09/2009
- this is very well writen...and i didnt read the 1st part....i guess i sldv cuz i almost stopped reading cuz i thot he was gona rape her...then i thot y wld a vamire do that?? so im off to read the 1st part...nd if u can plz check me out in the arena nd tell me wat u think...plz comment
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- The Grooster - 08/05/2009
- Nice
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