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You may not belive in ghost, goblins and monsters. But I do, and after this frightening tale you might change your mind. The day seemed normal to me as another boring day slipped past with out a word. But the day was not over, it was getting dark and my parents were not home from work, and my sister had a sleep over at a friends house. I was alone and would be for the next few hours. I settled in on the couch and began a movie, hoping be the time it was over my parents would be home. The commercials started and were playing for a little bit when the screen went to picture with the colored bars, and after that nothing. The tv shut off. I went up to it to check it or see if I could fix it. Looking up at the black screen I saw a figure standing behind the couch I was sitting at, but the figure had no real features to its face. It was just a big black shadow in the outline of a person! Turning a around the figure was gone vanished it to thin air as though it were never even there!
The movie resumed and I let out a small shriek of suprise as it started behind me. I walked across the room and waved my hand around the spot the figure had been, but still I sat on the other couch straight across from it. I though it was just a shadow from outside or something. Or at least thats what I wanted to believe.
For some reason the sleepy felling I felt hit me like a truck hitting a deer. Hard and fast. I fell asleep on the couch with the movie still playing and the lights still on! When I awoke I was covered with a blanket, the movie was off, and the light were dimmed. I figured my parents most be home. I got up and walked to the kitchen to check the time on the microwave. It read 2:58 am. I started walking to my bed and notice that there was still a light on in my parents bedroom across the hall. I walked in and the sight I saw still haunts me to this day. It would haunt you too if you saw the mutilated bodies of your parents strewn across the floor. A foot here, a hand there, their heads sitting on the pillows of their bed. On the bed was a note, with tear filled eyes I read the note, this is what it said. "You really should know who lives behind your couch"!
I walked into the living room and with all my might I pulled the couch out to the middle of the room and walked behind it. There lying as still as can be the dead body of a man left behind cover with cement incasing the body! my heart stopped right the and there and I collapsed! The cops came, and left carrying the bodies of me and my parents and the one of the dead man behind the couch! I watch them go, a hand rested on my shoulder I turned around to see the kind loving faces of my parents!
I told you ghosts were real!
- by O_o-Karstan-o_O |
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- | Submitted on 08/25/2009 |
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- Title: Do you believe in ghosts?
- Artist: O_o-Karstan-o_O
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Description:
a scary tale to tell your friends around a camp fire!
and never will you want to sleep on the couch again! - Date: 08/25/2009
- Tags: lives behind your couch
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Gin_Ichimaru kicks butt - 01/03/2010
- dats scary!!! O.o Luckily my parents just moved the couches an hour ago and their were no bodies to be found. hahaha good timing! Anyways, I liked it! :3
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- O_o-Karstan-o_O - 09/07/2009
- one thing about my ghost story is that i left room for interpertation! this makes the read wonder what really happened and lets their imagination take then th rest of the way!
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- The Photogenic Frenchfry - 09/06/2009
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It wasn't that bad in the beginning, but the ending seemed sort of rushed. I felt that there was little suspense, and that's what makes a ghost story so good.
And why didn't the ghost kill you? Why did s/he tuck you into bed and kill your parents? That didn't make sense to me.
Also, why didn't anyone notice that the body was there? I understand that there was a couch on top of it, but wouldn't that raise the couch a few inches above the ground? - Report As Spam
- O_o-Karstan-o_O - 09/01/2009
- to sparky the hunter, i said the body was covered in cement! the smell couldn't get through!
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- Sparky_the_hunter - 09/01/2009
- It was good, but here is a question for you, how can you not smell a dead body behind the couch? Surely a rotting form of body mass would give off some kind of odor.
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- Wolf_heart14 - 08/25/2009
- how should i belive you? i live is missouri, so i have to see it, to belive it. but just in case, i wont sleep on the couch. i wont take a foot to the couch. i'll sit on the floor of on the recliner.
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