Love, Your Vampire

• Artist: stanptg
• Description: Chapter 4
  
• Date: 09/05/2009
• Tags: love your vampire

Next thing I knew I was in my dorm with him by my side. "wha? wha uh u ooing ere?" I managed to say. "You fainted. so i brought you back here." He told me. I shook my head rapidly so as not to lose my train of thought. "The reason why I sped out of the bathroom so fast was bcause that girl that knocked on the door was my sister." He told me. "It's too dangerous for you to be seen with me. How about this. Every night I come here" and I stay until it's time for class."
"Don't you have to sleep?"
"Christina, I'm a vampire and vampires dont need sleep."
"I didn't know that"
"I didn't expect you to"
"Thats very kind of you to say"
"I need to go"
"No you don't"
"Yes I do I have to get back to my dorm"
"Ok. bye" I leaned in and kissed his cold lips.

Comments

[stanptg]

I've pretty much given up on this, I'd rather do something about Harry Potter (I know, I'm a fcking newb, blah blah blah..)

[Lilith Celestine17]

This is very amazing I hope to read more soon, oh I'm also working on a vampire novel and I'll be posting the chapters real soon, so I hope you can check it out sometime

[stanptg]

Hottemper97,
I will write up chapter 5 for you very soon

Spazzy_the_turtle,
It's supposed to be like weeks(or months) have gone by. I'll edit it so you understand.

Umitama,
I don't want to copy twilight so it's not like twilight.
The story is very different in many different ways.

[hottemper97]

can you put chapter 5

[Spazzy_the_turtle]

ok. so im not trying to be critical but it picks up wayyyyy to fast. i dont understand it exactly. ummmm......coming from a not too critical fantasy luvers mind, i think it would be more of a strt and need some work b4 u continue. if u need any ideas feel free to PM me...i'd luv to help.

[umitama]

is this surposed to be like twilight???