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The world here is strange... at least that's what Abner thought. But then again, everthing on Earth WAS strange. I mean compared 2 hell.... Earth was a kind place. After being cast off from hell Abner had already incountered so much kindness he didn't think he could bare it. Slowley he trudged into an alley, and felt better. It was darker here.... damper, much closer to the land he once called home. He was suddenly filled with self regret. Why did he have to be so lovesick? WHY did the devil's wife have to be so intoxicating? Why couldn't he control his emotions? WHY WHY WHY?! So beside himself with greif, and pity, he never noticed the figure lurking in the shadows, until it was to late. The man or thing more like jumped out grabbed Abner.
"Shhhhh. U wouldn't want anyone to hear us now would u?" Abner groaded in protest. The things face looked so famliar. As he was trying to remember, the thing pulled our a long instrument. Now THAT he remembered, it was used for torture. What had he done now! Poor Abner strugged aginst the things restraints hopelessly. His unnatural strength had been taken away when he was expelled. His eyes widened in horror as the metal intrument got closer and closer. As it touched his skin he let out a muffled scream. It felt like a million needles digging into his skin.
"Shush brother. You're making it very hard to kill you." The thing said. Abner struggled with all his might to get out from the thing that call himself his brother. but to no avail. Then, Abner blacked out.
End part 1. U want part 2? Rate me high and leave comments!! on this, and my profile! TY 4 readin!
- by iNinjaFreak |
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- | Submitted on 10/11/2009 |
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- Title: Cool Day in Hell
- Artist: iNinjaFreak
- Description: A Demon cast from hell enters our strange world....little does he know that someone or something is lurking in the shadows, waitin 2 take him out. If u like it and wanna hear more.. leave me a profile comment. :D
- Date: 10/11/2009
- Tags: cool hell
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Comments (2 Comments)
- iNinjaFreak - 10/11/2009
- *sigh* i gonna lose lol
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- IVIezurashii - 10/11/2009
- Part 2 plz!!
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