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There the enemy if I dont do something some one might die, but if I try that some one might be me. I'm just one person i can't make a difference, what if all i do is get someone hurt or even killed, then how am I going to live with myself. No i'll just stay here and wait, the police should find a way to stop them any minute now. What if they can't though, I have to do something anything is better than sitting here hideing. They don't know i'm here though they can't know i'm not even supposed to be here today. To think i'm going crazy trying to think what to do and I could've been at home listening to this on the news instead of sitting here scared out of my mind. If only I hand'nt forgot my phone at the office, i'm going through all this over one little phone. I can't belive i'm being such a coward wishing other people dead just so I could be safe , I need to do something I know I'll knock out one of them when he walks by agin then I can take his gun and try to free the hostages, but what can I use in this little office as a weapon, stapplers to small the only thing bigger than that is the hole punch, but I don't no if i could actually knock some one out with that i'm not trained to fight, for christ sake im just an office worker at this stupid bank. Where are the cops at I can't even hear sirens, maybe they don't even know about this yet maybe no one had time to trip the alarm or notify the police. God i'm going crazy, ough god here one comes I can here his footsteps. Just wait for him to pass, dont panic just wait. Ok he's passed go, man he's bigger than I thought where do I hit him the head or back, I want to knock him out so yea the go for the head. I can't bealive I just did that ough my god, what was that sound did some one hear me. Got the gun now what, I don't even know how to use it. Knocking some one out is one thing but shooting them is a completely different matter. Got to stay focused some one could have heard me I'll head towards the front maybe I can catch another one of them off gaurd. What was that ough my god some ones running after me I've gotta run I cant get cought now, ough god there right behind me who's screaming what's that pain in my chest, what's happening why is it so dark.
The doctors conculded that he died of a fatal heart attack dieing almost instently, they said that he was litterally scared to death. Of course his family tried to sue the bank over his death but the bank pointed out that is was just a exercise to simulate what a real hostage situation whould have been like and besides the notice had been on his desk all day.
- by botumbomba |
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- | Submitted on 10/12/2009 |
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- Title: doubt
- Artist: botumbomba
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Description:
2nd time trying this please point out any mistakes and be honest.
- Date: 10/12/2009
- Tags: doubt
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Comments (2 Comments)
- botumbomba - 11/03/2009
- thank u for commenting, I was trying to tell the story by just using what the characters thoughts.
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- Nomi0001 - 10/25/2009
- Ok your wording needs some help. Watch your periods. Its a really good story line. It would be so much better if there was more detail on what is happening. It kind of loses me in places.
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