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"Alice....alice?....ALICE!"
"Huh?" I asked blankley staring at my best buddie in the world.
"You okay?" she asked.
I nodded "yea, i was starring into space again wasn't I?"
Kelsey nodded.
I sighed. "Whats wrong with me?"
"Honey, maybe you have to much on your mind."
I shrugged. "What could be in there though."
She only grinned. "Its you were talking about, lots of things."
I walked out of the school building and walked out to my car. My younger sister Amy leaned against the hood.
I nodded toward her and she climbed in.
"Hey Alice!"
I turned to the person that said my name.
It was one of the teachers.
"Mr. Mandel?"
He nodded. "Yes, good thing i caught you, i need you too do me a favor."
"Ummm sure?"
"well listen to what it is first, tomorrow your graduating right?"
"Omg! is it that close already! i totally forgot!"
The year had gone by to fast i didn't even have an outfit ready yet.
He laughed. "Yes, anyway the person who is supposed to make a speach well...cant, i need you to do it."
"M-me?"
"yes you"
"But-'
"No buts well i gotta go see ya"
Before i could say another word he was gone.
I turned and got into my car. My hands shook as i turned the keys.
"You okay?" Amy asked.
I only nodded.
I would have to be in front of people.
- by Xx_Emo_Girl_3_xX |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 10/18/2009 |
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- Title: My time
- Artist: Xx_Emo_Girl_3_xX
- Description: this is only a 2 chapter story so its realy short
- Date: 10/18/2009
- Tags: time
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Comments (2 Comments)
- ShadowsJewel - 11/07/2009
- srry but not enough details
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- littlewonder2 - 10/21/2009
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It wasn't a bad story, really, it just felt kind of blank. When you write, you've gotta show, don't tell. Because it felt boring the way you wrote that people might just skip right over it.
Better grammar might help too. - Report As Spam