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Dark and raining.
The early morning is new..
Someone's come to tell you a story or two.
This story is sad,
And tell's of a girl,
Such as yourself,
With white hair and blue eye's,
A smile that shines.
Her skin pale and flawless,
Her snow white hair curled at the ends.
This story begins with a smile and a song,
Peaceful and sad,
This song is sung as a reminder of the past...
Now the story begind, Enjoy it~
She sang like a beautiful bird. The night sky dark and ominus, yet light and warming. Her snow white hair that was down to her mid-back flowing in the wind. Her hands folded over her heart as she continued to sing. Her pale skin shown in the moonlight glew with no end. Her pearly white smile brightened the night, like a flash light iluminateing the darkness.
She stopped, her eye's open. A blazeing blue with a crystal like look in them. She turned her head to find a hiding dog. It was wounded. "You pooor thing..." She whispered softly. "Don't worry.. I'll take care of you." She said smiling. She stood from her kneeling possition in the snow surrounded rock. She picked up the small dog and walked away from her spot. She wore a long white dress, and an electric looking bright purple pendant around her neck. She walked to her house. When entering, her parents where no where to be found. Her eye's where slightly pain filled, saddened from her parents still not being home. She sighed lightly and walked to the kitchen.
"Stay here." She told the pup. She set it on the table and went into the bathroom. She took out the first-aid kit as the pup began growling as someone rang the doorbell. With a small startle she set the first-aid kit on the counter. She went to the door and looked out the window. "Who's there?" She asked as she saw no one.
"Open the door." Said a rough voice. The person began pounding their fist on the door.
Scared the girl locked the door up more. The chain lock and the knob lock. She backed away. "Go away!" She said as she backed into the kitchen and locked the back door. She locked all the windows and then returned to the kitchen. The knocking had stoped. She walked to the pup with the first-aid kit. She looked at it's wound and sighed. "What happened to you..." She whispered in a soft tone. She washed out the wound and wrapped it up. She fed the pup and gave it some water. She assumed it was only a baby. She made it a bed and found it was a girl. "Okay... I'll name you... Violet." She said smiling. "My names-" She was inturupted by a knocking at the front and back doors.
"LET US IN!!!" Two people yelled. Both males. She jumped with fright and Violet growled feircely.
Not knowing what to do, the girl ran to her room carring the pup. She took the pup and placed it in a drawer and left the drawer open a crack. "Stay here Violet." She whispered. She went back down stair's to the kitchen and took out a bucher knife. Smiling, she hair turned gray and her eye's started turning purple. "Now then... Who's at the doors?" She asked with a sly smile.
The knocking started again but softer. Then louder, and louder, and louder. She herd a shatter of glass as someone broke threw a window. She smiled. Her hair was now black and her eye's a bright blood red. "What do you want?" She said while on a defensive and affensive stance. She held her gaze on the man infront of her and her ear's twitched as she herd a chuckle from behind the back door.
"I'm your worst nightmare." Said the man infront of her. Smiling, he lunged at her.
Dougeing the man, she stood to the side. "Let me introduce myself then." She said with her pearly white smile. "I'm Raven, and you are?" She asked. Her eye's sparkleing with intent to kill.
The man ignored Raven and unlocked the back door. Letting his friend in, they both stood ready to fight. "Now... Let me introduce us." He said with a grin. His friend smiled too. "I'm Elliot and this is Jules." Elliot said with a smile. Jules bowed as if getting ready to ask a girl for a dance or saying thank you for an aplause after a show.
Raven smiled. "Nice to meet you both. Now..." She said with a smile while analizeing them both. "It was nice knowing you both too." She said as she thrust herself at them. The buchers knife was gone and she now held a sword. She always had it with her but it couldn't be seen unless she wanted it to.
Elliot smiled and lunged at Raven. Jules stood there observeing them both.
Raven smiled mysteriously. She disappeared and appeared above Elliot. "DIE!" She screamed. She drove her legs down into his back forceing him into the floor stomach first. She looked down and saw he was gone. Smiling wider she said, "I see... You'll prove to be a worthy apponant." She whirled around and blocked his attach with her arm.
Jules smirked. He started clapping and looked at Elliot to stop. "Very good..." He said. "Now it's my turn." He said as he took out his sword.
Raven smiled as she analized his stance. She took a defensive stance as her attacked first. A perfect block. "Try harder next time." She said as she swung her blade clean across his arm and it cut deep.
Jules smiled. "Fair enough. Until then. Farewell." He said as he disappeared. Elliot disappeared after him with a grin.
Raven smirked. "Whimps." She said as her sword disappeared and her hair turned back to snow white and her skin became pale again. Her eye's turned blue and crystal like. Her dress was white instead of black again and her smile had faded. She ran up the steps to the pup and picked her up. "Sorry Violet. My names Raven." She said smiling. "And you'll be my friend, right?" She asked. She was only 10 years old but when she got mad or extremely scared, the other her came to surface. the black hair red eye'd her was brave and strong. She was a fighter, but the shy her that everyone knew was nothing like the brave her.
~Six Years Later~
Raven sat in her class. Her hair was white with a black streak threw her bangs. Her eye's where purple and she was wearing a gray top with dark grey, almost black, jeans. Her shoes where black and her long sleeved shirt had neting covering it. Her bangs covered one eye and her lips where neutral. She was looking out the window when the teacher called on her.
"Miss Lynch!" The teacher said sternly before Raven snapped out of her daze.
"Uhmm... Yes?" She asked.
"What is the answer to problem 35?" The teacher asked.
She looked at problem 35 and thought for a moment. "Well... I think the girl.. Dorethy, should just split the roses between her friends by 10's. I mean, she has like, 350 flowers and 30 friends, she can give each one of them. She would then give her boyfriend the remaining 50 to show how much she loves him." She said with a shrug.
The teacher smiled. "Correct. You see everyone. Dorethy wants to give each of her 30 friends 10 rose's. She wants to giver her boyfriend the ones she has left. It's simple math..." She said. Raven had dazed again not knowing what she was saying anymore as she looked outside the window again.
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It was lunch time and Raven sat at the corner of the lunchroom alone. She wasn't at all hungry so she didn't bother buying lunch today. She had brought her sketch pad, a pencil, and an earaser. She was drawing a heart with wings and flames. It was cut up with stiches, chains, bandaids, and scrotch marks all over it. It looked so perfestional too.
"Excuse me. Weird girl. I'm talking to you!" Said a blonde haired, green eye'd, tan skined girl. She smiled a wicked smile.
"What do you want Kortney?" Raven asked with a scowl in her voice.
-Look for part two to see what happen! ^^- {I know it sounds like a show. XP }
- Title: Wodded Night
- Artist: InNoHurry
- Description: It is a poem at first, but it turns into a story.
- Date: 12/24/2009
- Tags: wodded night
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Comments (2 Comments)
- InNoHurry - 01/13/2010
- It's supposed to be a bit childish. A little bit of childishness is not always good, but not always bad. It shows a writer is still intouch with their childhood or at least willing enough to make a story interesting enough to write it a bit childish at times.
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- firefox228 - 12/29/2009
- there are some parts written a little childishishish, but most of it is written very well. its got an interesting plot and interesting characters. i like it.
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