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“Bye Mom” as Jakes leaves the door, while jake was walking past the school he saw children hugging their parents.
“Why am I jealous, I guess I just want to meet my real parents ”said Jake
After walking past the school a black hole appeared and he saw a group of ghouls(ghouls are like zombies or something)coming out of it.
Before Jake could run away the ghouls hold his hand tightly and took him with them in the Black Hole and Jake fall asleep because of the dark energy draining his energy. After awhile Jake woke up and he was surprised by what he has seen a dark, creepy world with no sunlight, at first he thought he was dreaming until a rock fall onto the top of his head he realized he wasn’t dreaming. As he looks at the place he saw a man with long black hair coming closer to him and said
”Hello there my name is Wraith, welcome to the Underworld ,Jake Grimm or should I say Grim Reaper”
When Jake was called Grim Reaper he can’t understand what Wraith is trying to say so he ask him if what does he mean of Grim Reaper. Wraith explains Jake what he meant and telled him why he brought him in the underworld, he said that Jake is the son of the Grim Reaper and he brought him in the underworld because he’s Father The Grim Reaper went missing, since then the underworld souls and enemies have been after the throne. He ask Jake if he could help them restore peace in the underworld, Jake was thinking if he could find his Father he could ask him about his real identity and so he agreed.
Wraith explains Jake what to do to get the throne and find a clue about the whereabouts of his Father. He told him to get the throne they must find the stone of Seven deadly sins and present it to the Five Lords of the Underworld, after wraiths explanation he ask him if where they could find the Stone of Seven Deadly Sins and Wraith replied
“I don’t know the exact location of the six stones but I know the location of the stone of Gluttony, it can be found at the Doom Island to get there we should meet Davy Jones the Captain of the Flying Dutchman”
So Wraith telled that Davy Jones can be found at the Asphodel Meadows (Asphodel Meadows is the town where human souls can start a new life) . After arriving at Asphodel Meadows Jake saw human souls falling down and he was trembling as he saw them falling. Wraith ask the souls living in Asphodel Meadows if where could they find Davy Jones and the soul shouted
“It’s the Flying Dutchman” said one of the human souls.
As Jake and Wraith looks at the ocean he saw a big, green creepy ship heading their way and it was The Flying Dutchman. As the Flying Dutchman stop ,the stairs were arrange and he saw an old man with black beard and with a few skeletal bones that can be seen coming down the ship. As soon as Davy Jones got down Wraith and Jake went to meet him fast and explains all the details. After explaining everything they ask him if he could help them go to Doom Skull Island. Davy Jones laughed
“MWUUUUUUAAHAHAHAHA, lets sail for Doom Skull Island”
Davy Jones invited them to go inside the Flying Dutchman, as Jake is wandering around he met Jack-Jack and Jugo one of the sailors in the Flying Dutchman. Jake and Wraith rest in the Flying Dutchman .After the next day before, the Flying Dutchman set seas.
To be Continued
- Title: The Underworld:Chapter 1
- Artist: spideys
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Full Title" The Underworld:Journey to Doom Skul Island"
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Thi is the story about a 12 year old boy named Jake Grimm who was abandoned by his real parents and was adopted by another family.As he wanders around a black hole appeared bringing him to the underworld. - Date: 02/24/2010
- Tags: underworld grim reaper fiction horror
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Shan face - 03/14/2010
- You should keep the story, but rewrite it so that it makes sense. The grammer is really bad.
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- spideys - 02/24/2010
- Can u give opinions pls
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