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Haruka stared at the young boy lying bedridden in the small hospital room, devoid of all emotion. "They're all useless..." She mumbled to herself.
"Haruka." Someone called from behind her.
"What do you want, Arashi?" Haruka spat irritably.
"It is time for us to leave." An older boy appeared behind her. He put his hand on her shoulder, but she slapped it away.
"I am not leaving!" Haruka shouted.
Arashi replied, "He is going to die. There is no way a human can survive those wounds."
"I know that." Haruka paused as if in deep thought. "Something does not feel right. This boy.... something will be left unfinished in his life."
"Yes, I believe he had a sister."
"Had? Is she dead?"
Arashi nodded. "She was murdered."
"I see... He devoted his whole life to find his sister's murderer." Haruka gnawed restlessly on her thumbnail. "My, my, I hate to leave things unfinished. Especially when human souls roam around in a forever incomplete life." A long silence collapsed upon the two companions. "I must find the murderer this boy had been seeking." She said suddenly.
"You cannot! Humans are not worth our time!" Arashi snapped.
Haruka turned away. "Obviously you care not about Chisaki." She exited the room hurriedly and swiftly stepped into the elevator.
Arashi called after her, "Haruka, I didn't mean--"
"I know what you meant." Haruka frowned as the elevator doors slid shut.
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Haruka stepped out into the rain, pouring heavily down on the Earth. She looked up into the dark sky, the streets were deserted. As the rain soaked her clothes and long, dark hair, she hoped no one could see the tears streaming down her face. She bit her lip, trying to choke back her tears. "Chisaki..." Haruka whispered. "Why... why did you protect me...? I should've been the one to die on that day."
- by SoulFighter724 |
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- | Submitted on 03/12/2010 |
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- Title: Unfinished Life (Part 1)
- Artist: SoulFighter724
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I think of my story ideas at the most random times. I thought up this one on my way home from school on the bus. Whoa! I didn't expect the beginning to be soo... dark? i guess. Yeah, this part is mostly talking... srry...
Just to let you know, Haruka means faraway or distant and Arashi means storm. Chisaki means a thousand blossoms. - Date: 03/12/2010
- Tags: unfinished life part first soulfighter724
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Comments (2 Comments)
- SoulFighter724 - 08/28/2010
- Omg I haven't been on here in like a year! O_O Thanks for the comment and I'll be sure to look at Chapter 2 of yours! biggrin Well... Once I can figure out how to find things on here once again... -.-
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- The Angel Dystopia - 03/12/2010
- HAHAHA!!! OMG deja vu!! its like the 2nd chapter of my story it has very similar dialogue, of course mine is very vaugue. But yours keeps me one my toes!!! btw my 2nd chapter is out if ur interested
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